Elizabeth

Yes this was a bit sad... Yet it was also like that chain letter... about the 3 year old who's dad drinks and in the end he killed her... I ...

Yeah sorry I didn't comment on this last night, the YWS was making me type in Chinese for some odd reason... I think you should honestly capitilize the I's considering ...

This sent shivers up my spine, or maybe it's because it's like 65F in the school, but I dunno. I liked this... it was very very strange though... confusing. But ...

Holy Jesus Christ Psy... Ahahahahahahahahahahaha Yay, now I shall be murdered. Give me your phone number, I miss your horrid voice and the screamings of LIZ YOU'RE A WENCH :P

Pretty good I kind of simmed it though, I'm feeling neausous from my meds but this is still pretty good. Leaves me thinking about things... hmm.... hee hee isn't sentence ...

Wow... Man, this was beautiful... I'm serious. This was beautiful. For there as much you drown you bounce to life, As much you get drenched, you learn to love and ...

J.K. Bonogofsky I THOUGHT THAT WAS A FAKE NAME Or am I being delusional or crazy or something? Heh? Is that your name? (O_O) Anyway, yeah it was a good ...

Wasn't Christopher like that 14 or 16 year old boy who wrote that book? I'm pretty sure he was that old when he wrote Eragon. I'm pretty sure he WROTE ...

God I wish I could have written this for many people. *cries* It was friggin' beautiful! *cries harder* NOW IT'S TOO LATE! "Oh, my sweetheart, I have fallen in love ...

Hmm... yes, this twas a bit odd.... Yet.... Yeah, I totally believe that whenever I begin to write the thing I'm writing on is the thing that I'm murdering :P ...

Yeah, Noxious is right. Too many AGAINS I think if you took off AGAIN at the end of all the lines and did one huge AGAIN !!! Then it might ...

I couldn't finish it, but it sounded good. But I honestly think your paragraphs are way too long. So you should fix that before I come back and finish reading ...

it was beautiful. It annoyed me that you rhmyed stream with stream in the first stanza though. Agh... now I'm trying to figure out like.... what this MEANS...but i'm slow ...

Yeah... to me it seems like she and the guy who drove her did her and they had a child but in the end she didn't want the kid so ...

Dam! isn't tehre an N at the end?? anyway this was very interesting. I mean though, whey would a guard wanna help her? was there a past relationship or something? ...