Elinor

Hi! I'm not going to lie; I really, really liked this poem. I think that it had a nice flow to it, and the rhythm is extremely catchy. Your simple, ...

I think I know why this piece doesn't have any critiques. It's way too long of a piece for reviewers to trudge through and analyze. You should probably keep your ...

Hi! You wrote this when you were 8 ?!! Dang, it's quite impressive. You wrote better poetry then I do now. I think it's quite a sweet bit of poetry! ...

Hi! So, so far, I agree with everything Snoink and shubhi have said so far, but I just wanted to add something to that. If you think grammar isn't really ...

Hi, Gladius! So, being a girl who has never played a Zelda game (I've only seen parts of them!) but is a great fan of the story and the character, ...

Hi! So, I think it quite like this. In so few words, you manage to create powerful characters and a memorable and simple story, which I think is really nice. ...

Hi there! Alright, well, to add to what Navita just said, the subject you've chosen is easy to right about but hard to write well. It pops up often in ...

Hi! Okay, so, I think you need to listen to Navita. She's given you really good advice, but I just wanted to add something to that. Even if this meant ...

Hi JD! Well, I want to say that I really liked this. It was a sweet, and cute. I just love the descriptions and scenery that you create with your ...

Hi! So, a few things. If you hadn't requested me to do this story, I probably still would have found it and reviewed it. Why? The title really drew me ...

Hi! So, I think this was a bit better then your first poem that I reviewed, but you still fell into a lot of the same problems. There are two ...

Hi! Before I mention anything further, I notice you've been here for almost two weeks and have done 0 reviews. You may have commented on some works, but they have ...

Hi! This was alright, and I like the idea behind it! However, the poem seems overall a bit too choppy, especially in the first couple of stanzas. When I read ...

Hi! Okay, so is this supposed to be a script? If it is, you've got the format totally off. This article should be able to help you out. If it's ...

Hi there! Hmm, this was an interesting poem, and I'm not quite sure what to think of it. It's certainly good-you have a nice rhythm and flow-but the subject matter ...