Elinor

Hiya, I really liked this. The ending was certainly unexpected and sent a chill up my spine. At first, while I was reading through this, I was thinking, "Why is ...

Hiya, I was about to review this and figured I should read/review the first part as well when I discovered that I already did. :P Once I remembered what story ...

Hiya, This is going to be a short review because I don't really have much to stay. All in all, it was a lovely poem. It created a soft, gentle ...

Hiya, In the future, you should probably wait till you've completed the chapter before you post it. If you don't want to, you can make that you are posting intriguing ...

Hiya, I think that that your piece has a nice idea. I'm very curious to see where it leads! However, you've kept it from reaching its full potential. This is ...

Hiya, This is absolutely lovely. I've chronicled this story from Chapter 1 but now I've decided to critique. I think you really have everything here, balancing the line between classic ...

Hiya, I am exceedingly sorry for everything that has happened to you, and I hope you come to realize that now matter how hard life can be, it is never ...

Hiya, Welcome to YWS! Just a tip for future posts you make! If you have a long story or a novel that's divided into chapters, you might want to split ...

Hiya, I'm not sure what to think about the story. It had its share of both positives and negatives, but I think most of the latter are just a result ...

Hiya, Since I'm not a big poetry buff, I'm going to critique you on just the ideas and content, okay? What I like the most about your poem is the ...

Hiya, I didn't enjoy this piece. I was happy that it didn't follow the cliche death scenario you find often find in horse stories. However, as I read it, I ...

Hiya, So, first things first. Whenever you post a piece on YWS, you should never, ever leave it as just 'untitled', 'my story', or something bland like that. When someone ...

Hiya, I don't know what you're trying to accomplish with this piece. It's definitely not prose, but even calling it a poem would be stretching it. You just list facts ...

Hiya, So, I didn't want to like this poem but somehow it sort of rubbed off on me. Maybe it has to do with the rhyme scheme? It's extraordinarily catchy ...

Hiya, So I remember critiquing this about two months ago, and when I saw this up I was quite excited to see that you had made corrections on this. I ...