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Hi, Wicked! So, I don't think I've ever read or critiqued a piece of yours before, so here we go! This was interesting, and I really like the idea of ...

Hi Forest! How are you? It's been a while since we've talked, so I figured that I would drop by and give this piece a review. It was definitely very ...

Hey, Darth. :) So, I liked this poem a lot - it was very sweet and simple and I think, like hhrockstarz said, it's easy for a lot of girls ...

Hey, Huff! Here as requested. So, I really like this piece a lot, as I've told you before. It's very sweet and realistic, and you seem to have more a ...

Hey, Caramel. Here, as requested. So, I really liked this and can definitely see it working as a song. It's got some catchy lyrics and a definite ring to it. ...

Hey Dreamy. So these two poems are really good. You have insane talent, and I can only see you getting better and better. The imagery and flow of these two ...

Hey there. So, I think I like where this story is going, and I can see how it has potential. You've created some interesting little characters that I know I'd ...

So, I'm trying to decide as to whether I like this or not, and I don't know if I can come to a conclusion. While it's sweet and the messages ...

Hey Frosty, So, this was interesting, and I think I like the direction that you're taking it in. It's got potential to be really scary and chilling, but right now, ...

Hey. So, I really, really liked this story. It's very well written and spooky, and the ending sent chills up my spine. I love the way you balanced out the ...

Hi Hibiscus, I like these Haiku a lot. I think it's really cool how you were able to interconnect them all and allude to so much in such a short ...

Hey Rose, So, this is a nice little poem that you've got here. I liked some parts, like the references to the Persephone and the imagery in your last two ...

Hey Ninja. So, I liked this story a lot. You've got some really wonderful description and imagery, and really puts a neat little spin on an aspect of the holidays ...

Hey Kat. My main issue with this poem, I think, is that there isn't much in way of poetry as far as this piece goes.You definitely have some interesting ideas, ...

Hey Pazey. So, this was cute. It kind of reminded me of a short story that I wrote a few weeks back. However, it could definitely be much better then ...