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Re: Once There Was Beauty
Hey imaginer2018! My name is Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I really like the idea of this poem. It's definitely something that very much speaks to ...
May 1, 2018 -
Re: - text deleted -
Hey salmintea! Happy Review Day! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. So far, I think you have a really good start. It feels quick, and somewhat ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: on the wire [part one]
Hey Pompadour, I noticed this has been sitting with only one review for a while, so I thought I'd jump in my thoughts. First of all, I wanted to tell ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Scream For Me
Hi MrsxCreepypasta, Happy review day! I'm Elinor and I'm here to give you a review. At creating an intense and violent atmosphere, you definitely succeed. It made me think of ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Unerwartet
Hey ayushinav! Happy review day! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to review your story. I think this definitely promising. Tonally, it reminded me of Alice in Wonderland in that this ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Always in A Blue Moon - Chapter Two: Journey
Hey Lupin, My name is Ellie, and I'm here to give you a review. So far, I think this is a really solid chapter in your piece, and I like ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: Sadness Has A Funny Taste (short story... very short)
Hey Sakura! I'm Ellie and I'm here to give you a review. I think this story has a lot of potential, and as it stands it is certainly touching. I ...
Apr 9, 2018 -
Re: Undertaker
Hey Kafka! Lovely to see you around YWS again. I thought I'd take a look at this story of yours. For a relatively simple concept and execution, this is rather ...
Apr 9, 2018 -
Re: "Danser" Pt. 1
Hey manilla! Sorry this took a while, but I'm getting to your review as per your request! The song is really beautiful. Was the story itself inspired by it as ...
Apr 3, 2018 -
Re: Our Secret Dance [1]
Hey Lightsong! Here to give you your review as per your request. I enjoyed this, and I'm excited to see where it's going. Everything is going almost too well right ...
Mar 29, 2018 -
Re: Summoning Persephone (750 words)
Hey Dreamworx! Happy review day - Ellie here to give you a quick review. I saw you had some chapters in the green room, so I wanted to start from ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: A Space Escape
Hey alliyah! Happy review day! Elinor here to give you a review. I think the strongest part of this story is the atmosphere that you build. You definitely do a ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Short cryptid story Loch Ness monster aka nessie
Hi Spartan! Ellie here to give you a review. I actually don't know too much about the Loch Ness monster and I'm not sure how much research you did, so ...
Feb 22, 2018 -
Re: Wildest Dreams.
Stella, I don't remember the last time I've read any of your writing/something you've posted, but this is great. This reminds me in a way of blackout poetry, although I've ...
Feb 18, 2018 -
Re: A Story About A Story (No E's)
Hey there! Ellie here to give you a review. Sorry that you missed the deadline, but I'm glad you decided to put the story up on the website anyway. I ...
Feb 15, 2018
