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Pudin, Pudin, Pudin. Let me just say that I really enjoyed this piece better then the first part. I'm not in the mood for nitpicks today, so I just wanted ...

Hey, Starlene! Here to review your piece. Your lies are all coming back Should be a comma after back. swirling around, and around Swirling around and around, Never ceasing to ...

Hey, hey! What's up? This was a very good poem, but reading through it, see you need to work on your grammar. A broken heart . T he tears start ...

Dakota, don't worry. It dosen't end tommorow, It ends September 1st, so you still have the rest of today, saturday, sunday and monday before the contest is closed to new ...

Hey. I would just like to say that I really enjoyed your poem. It is very, very impressive for your first attempt. I enjoyed practically everything, the message, the voice. ...

Hey Quibbons! I'm here to review your piece. I have one nitpick before we begin. It's about your title. Poisen , Beauty and War The word i bolded is spelled ...

Hey, silented1, what's up? I really enjoyed your poem. It had a very interesting voice. The only problem you seem to have is your grammar. Your ellipses (...) can really ...

Hey Babygirl! What's up? First off, I think your poem is well written, and you don't have any errors in grammar or punctuation that I noticed. The major problem with ...

Somebody’s gotta die, Take your pick. The way you phrased this dosen't seem to really have much punch. Maybe you can try to add more before this. (i.e. You won't ...

The night was peaceful, except for the constant noise of laughter and out of place comments coming from the living room. I understand what you mean in this sentence, but ...

"Casey, it's bedtime. Time to go to sleep. Bed. Now," her father told her sternly while pointing toward her bedroom. This sentence Is a little awkward, and the father's dialogue ...

Hey! Here's your review as promised. NO. Don't fall Why is the no capitalized? It's kind of distracting, so you maybe you could find something else to emphasize it? Italics, ...

It turned out that the Dark Wing was right around the corner. The Dark Wing was right around the corner. Kevin must have circled back during the chase. I do ...

Hey there Shina! Here's my review The roses have wilted since the last time I've been here. I really liked this. Perhaps you could add a few more sensory details? ...

Okay, first off, Galerius, I really liked this, but I couldn't really understand what was going on. I'm not in the mood for nitpicks, but I just want to say ...