Elinor

Before I begin this review, I would like to ask if you have read the rules. You shouldn't type in all caps. But since you're a new member and this ...

Review 4/10 Kat, wow. I'm amazed again. I love your word choice and your sentence flow/voice and tone. There is nothing for me to really nitpick or poin out, because ...

Okay, I'm not a twilight fan at all, but I reall enjoyed this. It was detailed, rich and exicting. Not in the mood for nitpicks, but there actually are two ...

Review 3/10. I see the darkness in you, The darkness? Oh no. What's happened? And I can't avoid thinking I'm responsible I've stained you. There should be a period after ...

Hey Kat. I'm here with revew 2/10 :-) My soul has shred to pieces, Should be a period after pieces. my heart has burned to ashes, Period after ashes. My ...

Kat, you are a pure genius. When I was reading this through the first time around, my thoughts were wait, what? Is this a satire? Is she for real? Then ...

I know this sounds really, really emo at the beginning, but bear with me. It gets better. Hey, that's alright. Sometimes emo poems, if they aren't over done, can actually ...

Winter is a sketch void of color but sharp and sure. I'm not quite sure that I understand the context of sketch' or 'sure'. It is also wispy like bare ...

Hey, Shina. What's up? This was a really good piece; you're definetly an amazing writer. Now for the nitpicks. . . Its screech will pierce you. 'pierce you' here dosen't ...

Kat, I loved it. I really, really did. You had an excellent language flow, expcept for the second line, which I thought broke it up a little bit. Your grammar ...

Hello Pudin. I really enjoyed your poem. It was definatley better than anything that you've ever wrote before. I do have a few nitpicks, though. In a lonely room she ...

Hello. What's up? I really enjoyed the piece, but the reason I did was the reason I disliked it, as well. Before I get to that, here are the nitpicks. ...

Hey again Empress. I read this through, and I saw that Stella pretty much got everything, but I still have one nitpick. Otherwise, It's an extremely well-written piece. a girl ...

Hello, Empress. Here is your review, as requested. I'm not going to be nit-picky today, but I'll sum up how I feel about this piece. I didn't enjoy it, but ...

Hey Animal Princess, I really like this and I envy your ability to rhyme and have it make sense, which is something i totally fail at. Anyhow, on to the ...