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Hello Mr. Knightley! I really enjoyed this poem, but let's break apart the nitpicks, shall we? If I were the wind, I’d fly. This contraction is confusing, and it kind ...

Hey Hawkie! Ellie here. This was actually very a decent poem, and I don't have too many problems with it, but I feel as though that there were are few ...

Hello Jasmine! I enjoyed this, and I couldn't find very many problems with it. However, it seems as though you improperly quoted a lot of words. Holiday Inn should be ...

Hello. This was a cute story, but I have a few major problems with it. First, the story was very generic - too many things about it fell flat. It ...

Hello Jiggity. This was very good, even though it seemed more like a first chapter then a prologue. I think this could be shortened down even more, considering that you ...

Hello there anima. Even though your poem was well-written, it was cliched and not very original. It follows a typical plot of a sad poem; girl falls in love, girl's ...

Hello there! Let's take a look at this story ^^ Hey everyone. This is just the very first little part to my book. It's extremely small, but I would really ...

Hello there Bittersweet. This was a beautiful poem, but it was confusing. Especially at the be beginning, I feel as if I'm reading a few separate poems. In other words, ...

Hello there Forest. Here is your review, as promised. To start off, well, It has potential, but the ending sort of falls flat on its feet. You say that you ...

Hello there! I don't think we've met, but nevertheless, allow me to review this fine piece of work! A plain white farm house. A soft valley ringed by hills that ...

Hello there Ellie. Let's take a look at this poem, shall we? ^^ We're studying protons right now, so this should be interesting. They live in a tiny world Of ...

Hello Galerius. You reviewed me, so I thought that I could return the favor. For the most part, this was a very well-written poem. I agree with what Juniper said ...

Hmm. Your poem is better, but not that much better. We understand the "love touch" metaphor now, but you still didn't change it. I'd recommend doing that so future readers ...

Not that I completely agree with Snoink, but I do believe it is very preachy. Too preachy, even. It does has potential, but you don't have to be so flowery ...

Hello Chevy. This was a very sweet and sad poem. However, I felt as though it read more like a fragmented piece of flash fiction then a poem. Although I ...