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Hello Mars! These are all very good. I love short poems, because they show that something doesn't have to be long to be artistic. First poem: This one was perfect, ...

Hello there Faerie! Most of your poem didn't really make much sense. Here is what I mean. I am on the Moon. No one can find me here To no ...

Hello there! For the positives, I really liked this poem. It was short, sweet, and too the point. Your rhyming style was charming and inventive, not too forced. For the ...

The Hunger Games is definitely an amazing book. It was charming, original, fresh, and excellently written. The only thing I could really nitpick about it was its predictability. Captain- I ...

Hello Vampy. This poem is quite good, as it was sweet and sad. However, you spend too much describing the beautiful and vibrant earth, that when bad things come, we're ...

Hello there! I enjoyed this, as it well written. However, I do have a few problems. First, what happened to your line breaks? There are no stanzas, and instead there ...

Hey! This was very good. I adore short poems that are able to convey such powerful messages. Like another haiku I reviewed earlier today, you were able to capture some ...

Hey! I really liked this. You're a very talented writer, and I especially love the comparisons to popular culture that you use, as well as the similes. You completely convey ...

Hey Pen! This story was quite good, and Fruit Basket got all the grammatical errors that I noticed, so I'll critique it on content. Although the premise was intriguing, your ...

Hello again Forest. I enjoyed this poem; it was a lot better then your Pearl Harbor one. The beginning is a tad on the emo side, reflecting on how sad ...

Hello there Faerie! Wow, is this poem short, but it doesn't really matter, does it? Quality is what counts, because it was cute and and funny. I felt as though ...

Hello Juliet. Before I begin this review, I would like to mention that you have three literary works posted and no reviews. Here on YWS, our review to work ratio ...

Hello Forest! This was a very pretty poem with a sweet message. Pearl Harbor was definitely a touching day in the history of our country, and you captured that very ...

Hello Anima. This was a very good story, but it was confusing in some parts. July 30 2014 I'm confused. You usually don't put dates down right away unless your ...

Hey, this is a really good poem, and I appreciate the fact that you were able to insert such a powerful piece of art in only six lines. It just ...