Elephant

I ws wandering around the pages, and found this. I know it's sort of old, and I am commiting Necromancing but I like this. Anything induced by drugs has got ...

I know a worse version. :D I like it though. and your topic is on FIRE :twisted: (there is no fire emoticon so the devil smiley will have to work) ...

reformat the begining... Dungeons and dragons by morning, Chess club meetings by afternoon, And if he enough time at the end of the day he'd sit down and watch his ...

I agree with Chevy, that the imagery was cloudy, but in a way, like a cloudy day gave it an interesting light. I especially liked the second stanza. Aromas of ...

Nice start. I have to agree with Jacquie on the descriptions, spice them up a bit. I like the first part with Gillian and Bisset, but the part at the ...

Very interesting Griffin, I especially liked the quote and the narrators answer to it. I think Boni_Bee and Jigsaw got all the grammatical errors. I have to agree with Jigsaw ...

I suggest reformating this here, so it's easier to read; break it up into paragraphs, that are separated by line breaks. I like this, and with your cliff hanger it ...

hahahhah, I got quite a laugh out of this. I really enjoyed the conversation between the narrator and the robot. Also the bit about un-uniqueness. Being a Hitchhiker's fan myself ...

hmmm...I like it, as I am interested to read more. Some nitpicks I found. 1. part of her citys destruction - it should be city's 2. their city and the ...

It seems a trend here, using the allusions and imagery of the cold. Here it goes... you have to be worse to get better - I am not sure I ...

hmmm...I probably shouldn't be trying to decifer this at this hour, oh well. I liked how you began this poem, it made me what to read more. Norway...hmm? that was ...

when I read the title I was immediatly in the frame of mind of a Frost work. What I liked - 1. the inner-stanza rhyme, it lead a nice feel ...

Nice. Had a laugh over this line, very clever “You can call me Greg, and if that won’t do you can call anything so long as you’re consistent. Anything but ...

look guys tis my first review... I really like the first two lines - Being in love with you Is like yoga - really original allusion. is this Flotating supposed ...