Elelel

I like this! It began a little awkwadly, but it really began to flow about half way through, and the ending made smile! :D

OK, took me a few days to re-read it (everytime I started I was interrupted by annoying trivials such as dinner, brother and parents.) Here's what I noticed Try not ...

I named the prologue too my story Honey! Honey... it's a good word for describing thick, golden and sweet!

Yes! This is good! Exactly what they said, and more but I can't think of good enough words...

Hehe... yes I am shy... maybe soon, I've got another I'm just finishing off... Thanks for all the help guys!

I could NOT write poetry like THAT when I was in 5th or 6th grade... *continues to stare as she has been for the past hour*

I like it... very... though provoking.

I think it was... there was honey in "crush" the poem that this one was about (sort of) Anyway... really like this! That's exactly how I feel when people do ...

Love it! I came back to re-read it... again, and probably will again... and again... and again... etc. :D

Sorry, so many stories, so little time *begins laughing hesterically* I'll get roud to it! Promise! I just also have to get round to Arvy's and Firestarters second bit... and ...

Like it too! "never, never" could be: "never ever" And I think: "Greed if my falter" should have been: "Greed is my falter" Hehe, typo! Anyway, I liked it!

Oh, I know that mood... I like it! Although "Muddy water absorbs my clothing." Should probably be: "My clothing absorbs muddy water."

*looks in awe* like that! like that lot's (look how bad my speach is in comparison!) Good ideas also come anytime you don't have the means to write them down... ...

You deleted it? I liked it! I kept coming back to re-read it because I liked it!

I like it! It reminds me of something I'm going through at the moment.