Eimear

I feel like a terrible fraud, because I don't have many degrees warm of constructive criticism. This was great! Hehe, no, I'm not done. I really felt like you were ...

Quite an unexpected theme, Ringo. I really did believe for a long time that there was nothing sinister about the speaker's wish for their love interest to sing to them. ...

First impressions of this caused me to question the structure. It isn't very well thought out, it almost seems ignored in your haste to deepen the theme of a psychopath. ...

This is a good, heartfelt poem, but a bit unorganised, Kris. To start with the rhythm is very set, which I was thinking would continue throughout the poem, except it ...

Hey, I've seen that you're new here for a while and I thought I should get my teeth into some of your poetry. You've progressed very well in the short ...

Hello! Well this was a pretty clear poem, despite the few abstract lines in the middle. I don't really rate the title to be honest. Firstly this is quite a ...

I would like to politely disagree. I don't think that heartbreak songs will become a thing of the past. In the same way 'Good versus Evil' will probably never become ...

I love the way you went for a solid, controversial issue. All too often people think 'that's been done before,' and go and do something really vague and too 'out ...

Alright, I'm going to shoot right from the hip. This needs quite a lot of work. Firstly, you seem at times to grasp your own thoughts and it begins to ...

Holloah, Suzanne! (Guess, this is a brand spanking new review since your last visit, isn't it exciting?) Actually, this probably isn't very exciting since it's just from me, and I ...

Heya. This is my first review after a long (but enjoyable) vacation, so sorry if it's not up to my usual standard- which isn't very good to begin with, but ...

Oh, wow. The imagery in the is awesome to the max. I think it's earned a gold star already for the vivid picture of a happy memory with deeper thoughts ...

There's a marked improvement in this as opposed to your last poem. This pleases me very much indeed. The concept is once again good as dealt with, on a whole- ...

Mom has made bangers and mash. Reckon Cinnamon's first "city meal" must be something else than burgers or barbie. Aren't Bangers and Mash a traditional meal from England? Mom looks ...

I couldn't connect with the speaker at all myself. I felt that it was so personal that I shouldn't even be reading it. If the reader can't care about the ...