Eimear

This is really very good. Although I agree with what Suzanne said about you maybe trying to be over poetic at times, therefore losing your thread a little. Other than ...

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The whole poem strives on it's supberb imagery. I mean, wow. It's great. As soon as I began reading a picture formed in my head and I knew what you ...

The errors and lack of punctuation really ruined it for me, I'm afraid. You lacked any real seriousness for you poetry in failing to notice the mistakes. They will cost ...

I would have to agree with Brad, I didn't really gain a deeper insight into the subject of dreaming or nightmares by reading this. The imagery is very juvenille, and ...

Awk shucks. I'm the second person to comment. Hehe. But back to the poem. It's alright, not life changes or completely orginal but there's some good ideas intertwined. Another thing, ...

Ooo. I liked. It seems kind of mundane and normal at first, but when you roll your eyes over the structure and rythmn it's kind of pleasantly quirky. I liked ...

It's....good. It didn't wow me, of course, but you made your intention of simply writing a poem and forgetting about trying to pin it down with punctuation and structure, ect, ...

So this is amazingly accurate, and superbly well written. I can't find too many faults with it, besides, I don't really want to rip it to shreds seeing as I ...

I agree with Vernon, a tad to shouty for my liking. But between, and indeed within the lines there is real potiental. Some great imagery, good word choice and rhyming ...

I think you deserve respect for writing about this issue. It's a very hard thing to do. Although I'll agree with the other reviewers in that you need to stop ...

I felt very confused reading this, although the language was remarkably simple. Hmm. I think you need to focus on maybe one aspect of the poem, and try to expand ...

I felt like this piece would should have gone on for longer, maybe even to covey the long hard slog of running in itself. It stopped far too abruptly for ...

Wow. I really have no idea what this poem is about, apart from, obviously Sherlock Holmes. What I can say is that the structure is good, although I think's there ...

Is there room for me on the spacing bandwagon? I love the structure! It's amazing, and made me want to read on, and on, and on. Perfect for poetry in ...