Eimear

I got the opposite vibe- I felt that the rhyme was great, sort of deviated from the fixed form but good nonetheless. I loved this, a real gem of a ...

Wow, a lot of different phliosophical ideas co-exsisting in one poem. I actually needed to read it a few times to make sense of it. Not sure if that's a ...

Surprisingly good. I new I was onto something good when I read the first line: The candles are lit for you, make a wish, make it dark. Your imagery to ...

OK, so I agree; it's a bit depressing however underwhelming at the same time. Questions can be effective in poetry but too many will just leave the reader feeling mildly ...

Questions arise in my mind As each moment pass by. I would put a comma here Reminding me how little I know Who am I ? Or Why am I ...

Hey Jenni- I never paid attention in math for the duration of my lessons. I'm very happy that they're over hehe. So I liked this, the title engaged my interest. ...

Hey, D. Just got a spare minute. So the mystery girl is upon us? I like her already. She seems...strong. Good portrayal of her character here: So, I don't really ...

Hey! Did you mean this was your Nano '07? From last year? Just curious...anyways- Ok so I enjoyed reading this. One thing I can give you is your originalitly. I've ...

Why did this speak to me so much? I can't even really see many mistakes with it? Even the 'average' language seems to be powerfully fitting. I loved it. Truly, ...

This really is very good. Why doesn't it have anymore stars? You have potiental. Where have you been all my life? I loved this! It's got me all excited. The ...

Interesting concept nonetheless. Telling us rather than showing aside, I'm intregued. Why does the poet not like Thursdays? A got a vibe of exams or something to that effect. Don't ...

Hey, so finally got round to reviewing this. I read it, meant to comment and then wandered off to do something else so...here I am! Alright, phew, here goes. It's ...

This reads very stilted. The overuse of 'she' brings down a well written piece. She was a great beauty, she was alive. She was human, she laughed and she cried. ...

Powerful. Took me a couple of reads to understand it properly, which is always a good thing in my book. And good on you for writing about a topical issue. ...

Ooo. I liked this, pure and simple. It made me go all shivery for some reason. I think it's good now, but you could make it great by trying to ...