That is how i feel sometimes. The poem doesn't really strike me to have a sceme though so i dont relly foloow that. but i can understand how the poem is trying to take the feeling that you are portraying. My own friend who is going to her first year of college now even had a panic attack when she turned eighteen because she realized that she wasn't exactly a kid anymore and all the years seemed to have gone by so fast without her even noticing most of it. I think that this poem could explain a little bit the way she felt about turning eighteen so fast. it was a good poem in free verse but i also think that you could have added just a little more substance to it.
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