Eimear

Wow. Forcefully delivered! I can almost feel the frustration and restlessness from here. I liked the concept, it thought it was okay, but there's such a thing as not hammering ...

Hey Suzanne. You won't believe what just happened to me. I just wrote a review to this- and then my computer decided to go to sleep and shut itself down. ...

I agree with bubblewrapped, if you were simply writing this piece for your own creative enjoyment, I think you would have had less problems with it's rigidity. It's a gripping ...

Hey 'Stoney. Long time no see. Actually, I don't think we've met all at before. So hello! I'm Eimear. Good lyrical poem. You really had room to express yourself in ...

Welcome to YWS! Before I go on to look at your poem, I would like to ask you to take a quick look at the Rules and Regulations we have ...

Hello, Onthemound21! Welcome to YWS. Just a quick reminder before I take a look at your poem for you, we do have Rules and Regulations that must be read. You ...

Hello, I'm Eimear. I make a point of not reading the previous critiques, for an irrational fear that I might subconsciously copy what the person before me has already said- ...

Hello. I am back for more. Indeed. I like the way this is coming along, it has a sort of smoldering presence about it. I wouldn't call it sinister, more, ...

No Time To Say Goodbye was a so-so thriller, but put it this way, I could have read the thing and worked out the plot even if I was sitting ...

I've been thinking about this all day, and I only read it last night. I respect your style of writing for several reasons. Firstly, you're using a female protagonist. This ...

Hey, I'm Eimear. 1. I liked the concept and the title was spot on. I really like the title actually. It might have been nice to incorporate that word into ...

Hello! Let me be one of the first to say welcome to YWS! It's great you've joined, hope to see you around for a long time to come. Just before ...

Hello! Man....this was good. Haven't read a good poem like this in ages. You did a heck of a lot of things right by this. Firstly, the subject matter is ...

This was good, I can't really give much criticism as it seems pretty free verse. The language was good- for the most part, sometimes in trying to make it flow ...

Hey Jon! Sorry I haven't been very active lately with reviewing your poems, or other people's for that matter, my poetry hasn't exactly been easy to write lately, and thus ...