Eimear

I think this earns a.... Bravo! Seriously, very well done indeed. It captivated me, at any rate. Perhaps because I am a champion of loving a good, strong rhyme scheme. ...

Oh my lord. That's a lot of song titles in a poem. I'm sorry but they distracted me completely from the message, and I had to go back and re-read ...

Wow, this is definitely gory. But you gave away too much, and told us far too much for me to think -'I really care about this speaker'. Let me level ...

I loved this! It's very graphic and sensual, I could feel the speaker's warmth and feelings of being smothered by the season. I especially liked the expert use of personification ...

It seems in this piece like you've managed to scratch the surface, but to a very deep pond. Ahh, terrible imagery and metaphors on my own part so apologies. But ...

I agree with all of Mathlete's comments. However, a quiet word of advice. Writing 'I would like at least 10 reviews' is a little off-putting to a reviewer, although I ...

I should be happy. After all, I have met real city teenagers and their anger – at least one of them. In a way, I'm content because of the new ...

Bravo my good friend. Excellent, you seemed to hit nearly all of my boxes with this piece. There were some fabulous concepts raised that made me sit back and go, ...

Ahh, Bravo! I loved this, especially born by the fact that I stumbled upon it by surprise. It's a great theme, coupled with good imagery (although there's always room for ...

You make me sad. You make me cry. You make me want to die. I sit here all brokenhearted. In this day, I wish was departed. But then, I remember ...

I've just realised that you're new. Welcome to YWS! Now, onto the poem. A vow of hope A leap of faith This world is alive, We all go out We ...

So Demeter's nit-picked this sufficiently enough, so I won't pull you up on anything like that. What I will say is that the imagery in this piece is quite weak, ...

It is an interesting theme, and done subtly enough to make me like it as well. But please please dot your 'I's in your work. It's like handing in a ...

This is very short. How perceptive of me you might say! *Bows I'm not sure about this piece. I'm personally a sucker for a good, quirky rhyme at the end ...

Okay, let's jump straight in! "Let's go somewhere; The tide can take us there." Away from a repetitious city Where no one subsists like us-- The witty. You sigh for ...