Dynamo

Let's not forget: right now Itachi is like, what, 20, 25? He was about the same age sasuke is NOW when he killed his entire clan, maybe older.

I really need some sort of critic with this, people.

I agree, this is awsome! And about what you said about being careful what I wish for, I would definitely enjoy seeing myself as one of the main villains in ...

I see... continue on.

Ah yes... but the story is about priates, is it not? I'm just saying it's a little boring for my tastes. If someone got shot in this chapter it might ...

Too much thinky-thinky, not enough stabby-stabby! That's what being a pirate is all about!

Ah, yes... god modding, my biggest flaw. Well, I want my main character to have awsome attacks to make the fight scenes really cool. But let's not forget how he ...

LOTR 4 3V4R!!

Got that right. If you want to know exactly what happens I posted an introduction poll for my story a while back to see if anyone would want to read ...

Bah! Sentence structuring is a literary war for me, a war I've been losing thanks to my exchange student program to Japan that didn't let me get any practice for ...

In case you didn't notice, his wings are the trait the he got niether from his father nor mother which was mentioned in the first chapter. And for those of ...

for those of you who read this part of my story before I could finish it. My dad kicked me off his computer last night so he could do his ...

I can see you're very touchy on the issue of racism. To me it looks like you put a lot of heart into this poem. Keep up the good work.

...wow, that was very profound. People write at there best when they put their heart into it, looks like you got it down to a science.

Sorry if this was tiresome to read, but it was necessary for me to put down this information to properly introduce the main character and the story, other wise you ...