Duskglimmer

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. It's not that old and anyways... who said there was a rule against responding to a piece months after it was posted? Many people ...

It was extremely short. And it seemed like it could be put better as a saying in prose than the format you have right now. And somehow, even though I ...

The only thing that really screamed at me in this was the use of the phrase "shinny light". First off I think the proper spelling is "shiny", and secondly, it ...

It was Farenheit 451 . Thank you! I knew it had a number in it but I couldn't come up with it for the life of me...

*laughs* that was great...

wow... that's... *searches for a word* amazing... It was really well done. I have nothing really constructive to say, but I wanted to say something ...

I liked the contrasts and the way this was worded, but I guess I expected a little something more to wrap it up and make it a comparison somehow.

I get how it works up until the two ducks in between two ducks... they can't be behind and between at the same time, can they?

*laughs* I like that first one... the second I like too, but I could never repeat... *walks off giggling*

*blinks* *begins to giggle* that was all complete nonsense, but I liked it. But maybe that's because I'm reading it pretty late at night/early in the morning myself... but just... ...

I like it. It was nice and simple and got out what it needed to say.

*blinks* wow... I... was not expecting that. *is unsure whether to laugh or just continue blinking* I don't know what you were aiming for, but you certainly got a reaction ...

I liked the images and how it all flowed together, I just don't feel like it ever really connected to the reader and started to make sense. It feels like ...

I have to agree with xanthan gum... I absolutely loved that last stanza. Really fantastic. *gives a thumbs up*

Thanks you guys.