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LOL This is hilarious. It made a nice break in my stressful day. Thanks for posting it. it was great!

Awesome! Are there verses to go with it? I'd love to read them if there were...

I really don't have anything constructive to say about this, I just wanted to drop by and tell you how much I enjoyed it. I think you did a really ...

Thanks you two. I added a few setences in places near the end. Let me know if it works any better.

I really love this. It's an excellent topic and I love how you've portrayed it.

I really enjoyed this with the new revisions. It works so much better and doesn't jump all over the map as it had before. the flow is also much nicer. ...

Wow... I really don't know what to say... this is really heavy reading... I don't even know how to comment on it... It certainly evokes a reaction from the reader. ...

*laughs* hey! I did my fair share of waiting for him to fall for me as hard as I'd fallen for him... I waited for almost a year and a ...

Yeah. It's about someone real. *smiles thinking of him* And yes, he feels the same way. I wrote this because he's currently a couple hundred miles away since I'm on ...

Heya. Thank you for commenting. I made a few changes to the stanzas that you all mentioned. Let me know if you think it's any better. Thanks a bunch.

I like this, but it seems a little simple, and it doesn't involve the reader's emotions that much. I think that this particular topic is a bit cliched, But I ...

Thanks much, Reichieru.

I liked this for the most part. I think you could have made it a little more powerful by replacing the cuss words with more descriptive words, but that's just ...

*smiles* thank you. I'm glad that you liked it.

ROTK script (sort of) Part VIII One year later the Shire has been fixed up quite a bit and the four Hobbits are walking through the woods. SAM (to Frodo) ...