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Yeah, really obsene. I give it a grade G+ . And i think he knows a glock is a type of gun. Hence the trigger pulling part. duuuur I know... ...

lol... yes, you are absolutely rubbing off on me... isn't it wonderful? And I'm glad you liked it.

LOTR all the way for me. Harry Potter is just too full of... teenage wanna be stuff... or something like that.

I get the feeling that if I ran into this person, I would immediately dislike them because they seem to be just as bad as the person that they're complaining ...

I liked it. Can't really say much else about it.

I've read this through three times and I still don't get it. But I think that's just cause I'm sick and my mind is totally not working worth anything right ...

Thanks. I have to admit that it's occured to me a few times that I'd like to see this on stage. I would love to try to do that, since ...

Thanks. I went back and fixed the problems with the bold and italics. As for developing plot... I'll try and work on that in the next piece. So far I've ...

Thanks. I'm really enjoying writing in this style... I have a few more like this planned and I'll be posting them up here as soon as I can... I'd love ...

Thanks! I've got a sequel in the works right now...

I really enjoyed this Bobo... I don't really have anything constructive to say, but I really did enjoy it.

I liked the first stanza, and the last stanza. But to me, each section sounded like it belonged in an entire different poem than all the others.

Thanks to both of you. Is there more to it? Not at this time. The main character (Kate), is giving me some trouble because of just how emotional this topic ...

*laughs* well... those safety precautions are quite annoying on dooms-day weapons, now aren't they? Thanks for making me laugh.

I really liked this. I really don't have anything that I specifically wanted to comment on, but I've read this twice now, and really enjoyed it. So I thought that ...