Duncan

Hi! I am not really into poetry, but I am interested in haiku and other Japanese styled poems, and so please excuse me if this review doesn't help much. As ...

I kind of love how descriptive you are in this story. It is so detailed and I could imagine it all. So now let's get to some smaller parts of ...

I want you to know that I almost cried as I was reading this piece. You had excellent imagery and a wonderful style and tone throughout the whole story that ...

Hi! So like the previous reviewer I think this story is adorable and cute. You described the feelings of the main character very well, and I love it. What I ...

Hi! This will not be long, because really there are not much to say. In fact, this is a wonderful story because you packed both action and a substantial plot ...

Hello! Like the others, I like the message you brought through this story, and the thoughtfulness to express this through this story. Using first-person for this purpose is clever as ...

Wow! I would never expect the story would end like this. You did a wonderful job of surprising people with your plot. Sorry if the following doesn't help much... She ...

Hi! Here is my attempt of breaking up your paragraphs (which hopefully should not be included in the word count as a quote). Benedict ran after his brother. “Bernard! Stop!” ...

Hi! :) So this is quite interesting. The start is easy to relate and it attracts me to continue reading, so good job on that. Sometime it is really hard ...

I think this short is quite a good one. This story is not really closely related to zombies, but to how a human being look at his or her goals ...

Hello :) So this is a short story quite well written. You have done a great job with description of the situation, especially in the first part of the story. ...

I like this piece. The cuteness and lightness brings me away from all of my tiredness. It is wonderful to read something delightful once a while, isn't it? The way ...

Hello! :) As the other reviews have mentioned, you do need a little bit of paragraphing and organization here. It would be more pleasurable to read if this is separated ...

I have not been reviewing since December, so this might be a little bit awkward. Anyway let's start. I think this is an interesting idea. I love reading dark stories, ...

Hi! Your title caught my eye, a thoughtful title indeed. :) The whole story is quite emotional. I have always wanted to write a similar one, and you gave me ...