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Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 8
I was reminded of a biology class when I had begun secondary school, where I had behaved badly and paid no attention in class. - this sentence isn't necessary, since ...
Dec 20, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 7
This chapter was nicely done. Feelings were well described. :D
Dec 20, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 6
I loffe le ending, good one. The end was transitioned right. I see what you were getting at from the beach scene but it needs to be a tad bit ...
Dec 13, 2012 -
Re: Behind Your Mirrors
good imagery :D
Nov 2, 2012 -
Re: What is Now
You know it's short. Beside that, the concept- good. and: second paragraph is the best. third para: the word believe twice at the end of both statements....maybe you can work ...
Oct 22, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 3
Hey! So my basic issue was the fact that any boy this age wouldn’t naturally speak in this way- I mean the writing’s too formal. But as a writer, it's ...
Sep 18, 2012 -
Re: deleted
Omg, you're back. And you're still as good as always. There's a slight change in your writing style, but it's nice. :D Look forward to seeing more from you. As ...
Sep 12, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 5
Sorry for the notification bro- shall review soon.
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Cuts.
Nice! :D
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: First day at school
Hope that helps. :)
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 4
-spot reserved- Little caught up now, I'll get right back at ya.
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Gayfriend. :3
Yay! My gayfriend got featured :D
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Music and fury
51 Views- 1 comment- and all my friends read this- God! nehu, I love this piece of my work:D
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Moment of Truth
AWWW, thank you. I know you can relate, this is for other students to relate to.
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: A Body Shot
There was adragon and a stripper and a man on the stripper and a shot and they moved away but who died? The dragon? So I didn't get your poem. ...
Jul 31, 2011