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  • Other » Realistic, Other
    Re: a_partofmyjourney

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY THOUGHTS I know exactly what this is about! In love with an artist? Their musuc had helped the speaker of this ...

    Jul 2, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor
    Re: Ode To Old Friends

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY THOUGHTS A beautiful poem and one close to you I can say. The tone of the lines and the emotions were ...

    Jul 1, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction
    Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Eight, Penned

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS This quickly seemed like an exciting novel to follow just by reading this chapter. It's the eighth chapter and ...

    Jun 30, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 29

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY THOUGHTS Oh didnt expect Jed to react this way, but it was important cause people dont change overnight. He has always ...

    Jun 30, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 28

    Hey there, Alice here to give a short review! So finally the matter is done and Mikel is arrested I believe. Ah Zybyrn is too shocked to soeak, I love ...

    Jun 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 27

    Hey there, Alice here for the review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS Whoa lot of things happened, let's get into it.. Zybryn’s gaze lifted. A tear ran down the side of his ...

    Jun 27, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Politics, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 25

    Hey there, Alice here for the review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS “Man, there has to be an answer to this!” Jed exclaimed as he lowered his hands from his face and ...

    Jun 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 24

    Hey there, Alice here for the review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS “A camera,” Jed speculated, his eyes moving to Zybryn’s face. “That guy’s been watching you.” Huh! Well, not expected this ...

    Jun 25, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 23

    Hey there Alice here for a short review this time! MY FIRST THOUGHTS Fireflies were already making their appearance in the dim light beneath the trees scattered about the apartment ...

    Jun 24, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 22

    Hey there Alice here to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS You did well with this chapter by giving us a small genuine talk between both characters. The starting was ...

    Jun 22, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 21

    Hey there! Alice here, to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS After the awkward silences of the last chapters, this one with Shiko lightened it in some way I guess. ...

    Jun 22, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 20

    Hey there, Alice here to give a little short review this time! Okay so Mikel seems like a jerk, but there must be something else to it I am sure! ...

    Jun 21, 2023


  • Hey there! Alice is here to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS A cool aspiring pirate we meet this chapter! He seems funny! I liked the three character's interaction and ...

    Jun 20, 2023


  • Hey there, Alice here for the review! MY THOUGHTS I stumbled upon it here! At first very scared to leave a review, cause you are a far better poet, and ...

    Jun 19, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: I Knew Chapter 19

    Hey there, Alice again here for the review!! MY FiRST THOUGHTS Lol why is Zybyrn so stupid, like I know he must have his reasons to be this way but ...

    Jun 19, 2023


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