Dreamy

This story has nice vibe in it. This one did sound like a cliche. A hardcore stupid agent and a soft clever assitant. You could have used more description. To ...

This is a complete piece of behaviour of the people in this world, I suppose. The plot is clear. Easy to understand.The characterisation is so pure and practical. You have ...

OOOHHWWW!!! This seems to be very disturbing. I don't know why but I smiled, not that I am twisted, but because that after a long period of time someone has ...

This story is really grasping. You have really explained it very well. To find for mistakes this is all I got. ''The dagger was still in her chest, and the ...

This piece of work deserves to be made into a TV show, but the thing is that, this has the resemblance of Harry Potter. Well, its really healthy to get ...

You are good but I suggest you look into the work before you submit it. It will avoid unwanted spelling mistakes and punctuations which you have got in lot of ...

'Fooled by desire' has caught my eye. The message that you wanted your readers to understand is successfully received.But tagging this under poetry is not apt. You should work in ...

This has something. Firstly the characters name is not really catchy. They are comical. As well as they don't really have the power of exposing the feeling that you want ...

This is so good for a first 'Time' writer. Don't be shy to post your work... Start working on this imagine, think, dream and make this in to a nice ...

This is a good work but there seem to be problem,the paragraph's have been repeated again ... You should jolt it to a full time novel. As you got the ...

Sad and repulsive. So this one is an novel, though I didn't really read the previous chapter, I kind of understood the story and the it is travelling. Its sad ...

Sad and repulsive. So this one is an novel, though I didn't really read the previous chapter, I kind of understood the story and the it is travelling. Its sad ...

Strong and explosive. Happens to everyone but the way you have said it got more power. One can understand your anger but it is very vague. If you would have ...

you are so good. U can actually make a novel out of it. There is no flaw in it. I t is so good and neat. But the flashback that ...

I guess you are indeed very bold enough to say that you are an liar... Not many do that including me... Your title is awesome and I can see the ...