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Re: Liz + Zac (7.2)
Hello there! This part of the chapter had a bit the elements that I was talking about previously but there's definitely a lot of room for development. I think what ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Liz + Zac (7.1)
Hello there! It's cruel to review a random chapter of a novel but thanks to you for your little snippet-- I think I know what's going on in here. First ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Swelter Rest
Hello there, Aleta. This is not a short story! I'm just going to let you know what I think/interpreted:stanza wise. So the first stanza: Of all the three, the first ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: The Thief and The Princess (Dark)
Hello there! I can never have a proper introduction to my reviews so let's just get on with it, yeah? First off, this is not a properly structured story now, ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: confession
Why do you do this to me? Maybe you should just sit down for a week and get this story done with because the delay is too much to handle. ...
Jan 7, 2017 -
Re: sensory assault
Ah, man! This hit me hard. Hello, there. Please bare with me as I try to find a way to review this delicate piece of work. I call it delicate ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: A Guilty Father
Hi! How have you been? I haven't been reviewing at all and this is my first review since forever, so bare with me as I shake off my rustiness. I ...
Dec 2, 2016 -
Re: Insomnia, Flashbacks and Rotten luck
Hello there! I don't really review poems so bare with me as I attempt to. Since I'm into folklore which is mostly about heart breaks and stories with haunting endings, ...
Sep 13, 2016 -
Re: Box of Souls
Hello, Holy! Long story short, I took 20 points for finding the Review tip and my heart bleeds for being a fraud and so I'm here to review this rough ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Religious Perspective - My Take
Hello there, Aravind. I appreciate you for mentioning that it’s only “your take” on the matter rather than writing a very opinionated article and presuming that “this is how it ...
Aug 21, 2016 -
Re: The One with Stray Dogs and Visitors at Midnight
Hi! All my favourite people are writing memoir and it makes me so happy. :’) I haven’t read a memoir, specifically, but I have read an autobiography that’s worth recommending—Wings ...
Jun 30, 2016 -
Re: Chase
Hi! I took my time in reviewing this, didn’t I? Well, here I am! So, this was so long, like too long. But it’s a script, that’s how scripts are, ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Forget Me
Hi, this made me feel the feels so I decided to drop in to leave a review that is often found in the first two pages of books, because hey, ...
Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: Live fast, die young, bad girls do it well
Hello there! The title made me check this out, because MIA for life!
May 9, 2016 -
Re: The Blockbuster Writer - Part 1
Namaste! _/\_ Look who took all the time in the world to review this chapter. :p You already have such wonderful reviews on this work, so I’ll try not to ...
Apr 3, 2016
