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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Liz + Zac (7.2)

    Hello there! This part of the chapter had a bit the elements that I was talking about previously but there's definitely a lot of room for development. I think what ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Liz + Zac (7.1)

    Hello there! It's cruel to review a random chapter of a novel but thanks to you for your little snippet-- I think I know what's going on in here. First ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Lyrical Re: Swelter Rest

    Hello there, Aleta. This is not a short story! I'm just going to let you know what I think/interpreted:stanza wise. So the first stanza: Of all the three, the first ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Thief and The Princess (Dark)

    Hello there! I can never have a proper introduction to my reviews so let's just get on with it, yeah? First off, this is not a properly structured story now, ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: confession

    Why do you do this to me? Maybe you should just sit down for a week and get this story done with because the delay is too much to handle. ...

    Jan 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: sensory assault

    Ah, man! This hit me hard. Hello, there. Please bare with me as I try to find a way to review this delicate piece of work. I call it delicate ...

    Dec 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: A Guilty Father

    Hi! How have you been? I haven't been reviewing at all and this is my first review since forever, so bare with me as I shake off my rustiness. I ...

    Dec 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Insomnia, Flashbacks and Rotten luck

    Hello there! I don't really review poems so bare with me as I attempt to. Since I'm into folklore which is mostly about heart breaks and stories with haunting endings, ...

    Sep 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Box of Souls

    Hello, Holy! Long story short, I took 20 points for finding the Review tip and my heart bleeds for being a fraud and so I'm here to review this rough ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Religious Perspective - My Take

    Hello there, Aravind. I appreciate you for mentioning that it’s only “your take” on the matter rather than writing a very opinionated article and presuming that “this is how it ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Realistic Re: The One with Stray Dogs and Visitors at Midnight

    Hi! All my favourite people are writing memoir and it makes me so happy. :’) I haven’t read a memoir, specifically, but I have read an autobiography that’s worth recommending—Wings ...

    Jun 30, 2016
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chase

    Hi! I took my time in reviewing this, didn’t I? Well, here I am! So, this was so long, like too long. But it’s a script, that’s how scripts are, ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Forget Me

    Hi, this made me feel the feels so I decided to drop in to leave a review that is often found in the first two pages of books, because hey, ...

    Jun 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Live fast, die young, bad girls do it well

    Hello there! The title made me check this out, because MIA for life!

    May 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Blockbuster Writer - Part 1

    Namaste! _/\_ Look who took all the time in the world to review this chapter. :p You already have such wonderful reviews on this work, so I’ll try not to ...

    Apr 3, 2016


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