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Re: my teenage juuls
Hey! I liked this. It read like a quick diary entry. And because of how quick it reads, the amount of characters introduced in such a short time didn't sit ...
Jun 13, 2019 -
Re: The Thief That Stole Excalibur (Part 9)
Hello Raven! I hope you don't mind me reviewing this part without reading the previous parts. Jster02 has already covered the technical parts, so I'll just write what I felt ...
Jun 12, 2019 -
Re: Reflect me
Hello there! Dreamy here to review this story. (It's been a long time since I reviewed anything so I'm little rusty, bare with me.) First and foremost, this story reminded ...
Jun 3, 2019 -
Re: Life or Death Chapter 2 Patrol
Hey! I didn't read the first chapter, I'm sorry. But, I think I have the general idea of what's going on. This is a decent chapter and I like how ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 15
Hey! I'm The worst at keeping promises. Honestly, though, I know myself, I know that if I start reading this I wouldn't stop. So I had to make sure I'm ...
May 7, 2018 -
Re: on the wire [part two]
Hello, Pomp! How have you been? I read this last night and I dreamt about the storyline. It was a bit vague though. The sceneries by the sea were all ...
May 4, 2018 -
Re: Bycatch
Hello there! This was an interesting read. I like how you have a merman instead of a mermaid, I think this is my first story with a merman in it. ...
Apr 21, 2018 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 9
Marms! Let me nom on you a bit nomnomnomnom (ok, that's weird) Anyways, I made a stop here because this chapter had a peaceful finality, it didn't make me want ...
Mar 9, 2018 -
Re: I'm really good at photoshop (pt 1)
Hi! This is not a review, just something I thought of: When Miss Wilson asked the interrogator that he wouldn't "tell this to his parents", I genuinely thought that Miss ...
Sep 28, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 6
Hello! How long has it been since I last read these chapters, my god, I'm a dreadful person; I'm sorry! D: I don't know if I've stressed on this but ...
Aug 28, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 3
Hello there! When I'm following a story, I usually read at least three to four chapters and review them all under one chapter collectively so that I'd have more to ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: Short story
Hello! Dreamy here for a review. This is a feel-good story, though there are few things that needs to be taken care of, like: grammar and punctuation. Let me show ...
Jun 16, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 5/14/17
Hello! I have read Frost Lark News but never really took to review it because this is a satire-- I find it hard to review works from that genre especially ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: Aschenputtel Chapter 3
Hey, Noir! Okay, this came in as a shocker, though it really shouldn't have. For so long, when I heard Fuhrer, I really believed that it was just someone in ...
May 6, 2017 -
Re: Aschenputtel Chapter 2
Hello DragonNoir, if I have to be completely honest with you I really like what I'm reading. I don't know if I've ever actually come across a serious WWII fiction ...
May 4, 2017
