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Dreamwalker

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Monster under my bed (On a lonely night)

    Dear, I wouldn't worry too much about the sexuality in this poem. It's subtle and toned down, so if you're a bit worried about the outspokenness of it, it's very ...

    Jun 4, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Rubble.

    Okay, so the first thing that popped into my mind whilst reading this was how formal the diction was. You obviously like to work with words and metaphor, which is ...

    Jun 4, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: lungs breathe, hearts beat and my mind loves

    I realize this is going to probably sound a little silly, but I'm curious as to why most of your poetry has become extremely sexualized. Lying was a topic you ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 28

    That last stanza literally hurt my stomach. And I mean that in the best way possible. This poem has that ache that I can't get enough of and then doubles ...

    Jun 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Whispers of the moon

    Now, I'm curious as to what the real purpose of this poem is. I realize I'm jumping into semantics right off the bat which is a little bit odd for ...

    May 31, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: A new angel

    Now, this is a rather interesting topic, and a rather specific one at that so I'm not going to get overly complicated on the choice of theme. After all, with ...

    May 31, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: dreamwalkerr

    You, love, are ridiculously talented. You took my challenge and completely spun it around like it was a silly plaything. I don't know how you do it but you definitely ...

    May 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: waterboarding

    And, after a nice large poke, I have returned! I think the most charming thing about your poetry is that you are so fluidly faceted. The way you're so naturally ...

    May 28, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: Creekside Thoughts: A Collection of Poetry

    Can you paint with all the colours of the wind? Dear, generally I like poems that ask hard questions. But I particularly like when there is some semblance of knowledge ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Clouds

    This started off which such promising imagery. I saw that first line in the description and thought 'this has to be good', so I came quickly. But the we jumped ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Twist my rubber arm.

    I spy with my little eye ;). Nonetheless, you posted. So a review should be in order. Now, love, I'm all for speaking your mind in poetry, and more so ...

    May 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Satire, Lyrical Re: Followers

    I don't know if the contradictory nature of this poem was intentional or not, but it's definitely worth something to dissect. So I'm here to pick at the heartstrings of ...

    May 22, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Deleted 27

    Love, I've tried desperately to capture that image, and never have I done it in the way you have. It was so clean and so bright, imagery-wise. It gave off ...

    May 20, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: tearing

    Oh Persy, run away with me. We shall elope into the sunset. But more importantly, have I ever told you that you absolutely slay me? Honestly. I actually cannot get ...

    May 16, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: ID

    A very prose-y poem, love. The kind that tastes of a cause rather than an emotion. I'm supposing upon this being satirical, seeing as the imagery is stark and rigid ...

    May 13, 2012


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