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Dreamwalker

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Sylenit

    Hey there. I'm The.Dreamwalker, here with a review. From what I could see from this little bit, you weren't really trying to give us a jump starter to the story ...

    Sep 12, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The runner

    Hey there, I'm The.Dreamwalker, here with a review. And I must say, your imagery is quite astounding. Reading this I felt as if I was running in your characters shoes... ...

    Sep 12, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A Perfect Dimension

    Hey there :). I'm The.Dreamwalker, here to review your piece of work. Okay, so, since this piece was a little bit confusing I couldn't go into my regular scheme of ...

    Sep 12, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The One Thing I'll Never Fully Understand

    Hey there :). I'm The.Dreamwalker and I'm here to review your work. Okay, so, lets get this show on the road. Grammar and punctuation This area was somewhat good. I ...

    Sep 12, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The dinner table.

    Hey there, I'm The.Dreamwalker, here with a review :D. Okay, so, since it has been awhile since I have been on here, I will break down my reviewing pattern. First ...

    Sep 12, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter one of "Didn't Know"

    Hey there! I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people just call me dreamwalker or DW but you can call me whatever you like :D. I'm here to review your work this lovely ...

    Aug 8, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alcohol

    Hey there Incog! Dreamwalker here with a review, as requested :D. You know the breakdown of my reviews so lets get this show on the road. Nit-Picks The ringing sound ...

    Aug 6, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Climbing out of the pity pot

    Hey there :D. I'm The.Dreamwalker, here to review your work today ^_^. Okay, my basic overviews go as follows. I first go into the nitpicks then I go into Grammar ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The mad psychiatrist

    Hey there Wooster! Sorry for such a late review :P. I feel bad, but yeah, I had a hard time deciphering this poem. I like it and at the same ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Country Girl chapter two

    Hey, teammate :D. I'm here with a quick nit-pick that I found while reading this piece and some of your prior ones. You have a bit of an issue with ...

    Jul 20, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Maiko of Gion

    Hey there Firefox ^_^. I'm guessing you've read 'Memoirs of a Geisha'? A lot of this story sounds much like it as it is a little more quickened, the character ...

    Jul 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: closed for editing

    Hey there :). I'm The.Dreamwalker, but most people just call me dreamwalker or DW but you can call me whatever you like. I see this might be your first meeting ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: .

    Utsukushii Rosey! Beautiful :D. Okay, so, since I haven't critiqued today and this piece was really interesting, I will critique it for you :D. Nit-Pick The girl walked through the ...

    Jul 7, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: URGENT short story for review (Brutal reviews welcome)

    Jumping a month into the future I see XD. Hey there, it's dreamwalker here with a review as asked! Like always, I started with my nit-picks, then I go into ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Not So Perfect

    Hey there :D. It's dreamwalker here with a review and since you reviewed my artwork you get my 99th review! How exciting ^_^ Okay so onto the review! Nit-Pick This ...

    Jun 22, 2009


According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way a bee should be able to fly. Its wings are too small to get its fat little body off the ground.
— The Bee Movie