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Re: Sylenit
Hey there. I'm The.Dreamwalker, here with a review. From what I could see from this little bit, you weren't really trying to give us a jump starter to the story ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: The runner
Hey there, I'm The.Dreamwalker, here with a review. And I must say, your imagery is quite astounding. Reading this I felt as if I was running in your characters shoes... ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: A Perfect Dimension
Hey there :). I'm The.Dreamwalker, here to review your piece of work. Okay, so, since this piece was a little bit confusing I couldn't go into my regular scheme of ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: The One Thing I'll Never Fully Understand
Hey there :). I'm The.Dreamwalker and I'm here to review your work. Okay, so, lets get this show on the road. Grammar and punctuation This area was somewhat good. I ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: The dinner table.
Hey there, I'm The.Dreamwalker, here with a review :D. Okay, so, since it has been awhile since I have been on here, I will break down my reviewing pattern. First ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Chapter one of "Didn't Know"
Hey there! I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people just call me dreamwalker or DW but you can call me whatever you like :D. I'm here to review your work this lovely ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Alcohol
Hey there Incog! Dreamwalker here with a review, as requested :D. You know the breakdown of my reviews so lets get this show on the road. Nit-Picks The ringing sound ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Climbing out of the pity pot
Hey there :D. I'm The.Dreamwalker, here to review your work today ^_^. Okay, my basic overviews go as follows. I first go into the nitpicks then I go into Grammar ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: The mad psychiatrist
Hey there Wooster! Sorry for such a late review :P. I feel bad, but yeah, I had a hard time deciphering this poem. I like it and at the same ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Country Girl chapter two
Hey, teammate :D. I'm here with a quick nit-pick that I found while reading this piece and some of your prior ones. You have a bit of an issue with ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: Maiko of Gion
Hey there Firefox ^_^. I'm guessing you've read 'Memoirs of a Geisha'? A lot of this story sounds much like it as it is a little more quickened, the character ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: closed for editing
Hey there :). I'm The.Dreamwalker, but most people just call me dreamwalker or DW but you can call me whatever you like. I see this might be your first meeting ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: .
Utsukushii Rosey! Beautiful :D. Okay, so, since I haven't critiqued today and this piece was really interesting, I will critique it for you :D. Nit-Pick The girl walked through the ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: URGENT short story for review (Brutal reviews welcome)
Jumping a month into the future I see XD. Hey there, it's dreamwalker here with a review as asked! Like always, I started with my nit-picks, then I go into ...
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: Not So Perfect
Hey there :D. It's dreamwalker here with a review and since you reviewed my artwork you get my 99th review! How exciting ^_^ Okay so onto the review! Nit-Pick This ...
Jun 22, 2009
