Dreamwalker

Super heavy poem, m'dear. Very much your style. There is so much substance in this piece it's difficult to really get a read on it without feeling overwhelmed. Like drinking ...

sometimes it feels like Siken is what inspires you, but today feels like Ginsberg (though i may be incorrect in assuming that). i love the narrative. i love the way ...

Walker here, as requested (though a little later than I planned so for that I'm quite sorry!). So lets get this on the road, shall we. The first thing I ...

And now for that promised review. I am both pleasantly surprised and, quite frankly, enthralled by this piece. It has such a visceral feel, but refrains from getting particularly gritty ...

CatInTheShower made a good point when it came to the way this poem is broken up, particularly in the spacing of your lines. There are countless semicolons, uses of the ...

The lack of reviews on this is appalling. Let me remedy said situation (though I fear this'll be brief as well). I love piercing poetry. I love the stuff that ...

And thus the saga continues. Before we get into a critique on the poem itself, I quickly want to pick apart that first statement suggested which doesn't necessarily clash with ...

Long story short, I wrote this long, intricate review that may or may not have autosaved correctly when I accidentally closed the tab so said review is now sitting in ...

One of the first things I noticed about this poem was that what you've bracketed off is far more impactful than the narration. I'm wondering if this is because of ...

There is nothing I love better than when a poet either throws structure out the window or uses full sentences and paragraphs instead of stanza's. It gives so much opportunity ...

This is, by far, your best imagery and the best poem I've read from you yet. If your other poems were salads, this poem was more meat and potatoes (unless ...

First things first; own your work. You're a poet. You wrote this because you wanted to write poetry. You should be proud of yourself no matter your skill level because ...

As I'm not quite sure how to address this, I'm just gonna go ahead and say 'you' instead of 'you both' if thats quite alright! And I'm going to be ...

And there's that space imagery making its way out of your work again, I see! Short poetry is and can be the powerhouse of poetry. It strikes quick and usually ...

My goodness, no reviews on this? Tsk, tsk. Let me remedy the situation. This is a rather self-righteous poem. Not, of course, suggesting thats a bad thing by any means! ...