Dreamwalker

I'm not sure why but for whatever reason the part that stuck out to me the most was the use of 'you' in the sixth stanza, like this whole poem ...

Quick grammatical nitpick: that failed to fix you is because I can't bare Bare should be bear (I know, the english language really screwed up on that one). Now, to ...

ngl Rosey, the lump in my throat is the size of Texas right now. I hate this and I love this all at once and I'm not totally certain if ...

This is so so so so late and I'm actually the worst. To be frank, I'm not sure how I feel about this poem. I mean there's some really lovely ...

Hey Marm! First let me start with a little note: I love short poetry, the shorter the better. It's like five lines of punch-to-the-face and I just, yes. Yes, short ...

ngl I put off reviewing this till review day so sorry for not leaving feedback sooner. This is deep and rich and so, so good so I'm gonna delve into ...

I am so unreasonably excited about this piece. There is so much content to dig into I literally feel giddy. So I'm gonna bypass the preamble and get right to ...

How does this have no reviews? Tsk, tsk. Anyway, hey there! Just a quick note before I get into this; I haven't reviewed prose in a good long time so ...

Hey there. Before I get into the review I just want to make a quick note on intentionality (cause I'm a theoretical freak like that) and the importance of the ...

oh ty, you wound me so Not gonna lie I've attempted to review this twice already just cause it hits me in all the good spots but, like so much ...

Hey there, friend. Just a few notes of interest; I'm digging the use of colour here. It's clear you're trying out new ways of expression which is super cool and ...

Hey there, friend. Just a few notes; Some of your metaphors were a little jarring (i.e. the top-heavy clownfish). They feel a little heavy-handed like you wanted to continue with ...

Hey there, friend Just a few notes: The title is cute. Something snappy about losing the 'a'. Gives it a more modern, colloquial feel so I can dig it. The ...

What a colourful juxtaposition there, friend And I mean in all ways. This poem is so demanding I had to read it through a good four times before I felt ...

Walker here, as requested (also is your url styx like the band styx cause if so that's totally boss). I'm gonna quickly run through my nit-picks first before getting into ...