DreamWork

Deleted.Sorry doubled post here^^!

Hi EnchantedPanda,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. I really like the concept of your poem here.You managed to portray the tragedy in poetic form even though ...

I see^^ It make sense to me :D Thanks for explanation!

No worries ,my friend :) I appreciate it so much !

Thank you.Glad you enjoyed this poem :)

Hi ajruby,'them' is actually refer to the hopes :) Like simile for sure.Thanks for review

I see,that makes sense ^^

yeah,I think so.I love this poem,but trying not to care much about the statement here :D

Percy^^ I always enjoyed reading your poem here!It's haunted and amazing at the same time.I dunno but you really have such vivid imaginary here. :D Kudos,cheers ~Dark

Ah I see^^.Well,enjoy your writing style here! :D

Hi Dreamwalker,not much to say here.I love this poem so much,you just need to capitalize the 'i' here :D

That is what imagination can do with us! :D

probably because it is too abstract and you do not use commas to make rhyme sounds smoothly here.

Thanks monster :) ,really appreciate it.

Thank you :D