DreamWork

Like what I said, I can feel the connection between them. The concept also unique ;)

Sorry, what do you meant by lyrical?

yeah, I think to add 'be' there, but just to make it short, I think no problem to do so :D

Yeah, u r right. I suppose to learn more on review a story :)

Review day forced me to review a story,lol! And I am not so good on it. *sorry* :D

Hi cailey, I enjoy reading your poem. It is adventures to me because I really love to travel! Indeed good poem :D

It is a grammar mistake anyway. I try to say that we often dream when we were young and we never know when we face the real world( when we ...

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I see^^ well, that make sense :) you should add A/N here for sure.

I mean, some members here just posting over and over again of their works here without thinking that they should balance it with reviews too. Well, you realize about it ...

I think Nate should frame this work ;) A special honour from the true-real member!

Thanks :D

I love your rhythm! Good job ;)

I see^^ Sorry I don't know about that!

Thanks :) I will fix that soon!