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Re: The snowy Moor
Hi Maia,Dark here to give review on your poem! It is very beautiful in every details and imagination that is formed into a stunning view.This is the real strength of ...
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Re: Your Words Will Change The World
Hi Joe,this is Dark again to review your poem! It can be easily understood by taking the theme of "the role of the writer to the world '.Although simple, it ...
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Re: Rain
Hi Joe,Dark here to review your poem!I totally like it ;) #Rain washed the city as I woke up. Its 3 AM.-->Something interesting about your poem is the unique tone ...
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Re: No More Apologies
Hi niteowl!Have a good day,here is Dark to give review on your poem. No More Apologies-->Through the title only ,we are able to make little reflection on your is a ...
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Re: The Snowman
Hello my buddy,GriffinClaw.Have a good day!Here is Dark to give review on your poem. Your poem is very interesting even though you use a simple theme. What makes it interesting ...
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Re: scriptless
Hello Kafkaescence,have a good day in review day today! Here is Dark to give review on your amazing poem! I like the message that you bring here. Really makes me ...
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Re: Who is the King of the Playground?
Hi yubbies21! This is Dark again to review your poem! Who is the King of the Playground? The title caught my eyes.The question in the title very helpful in explaining ...
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Re: Hairball
Hello yubbies21,have a great day in review day!Here is Dark to give review on your poem. First time I saw the title of your poem, I was glued for a ...
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Re: Martin
Hi CrystalPony21,happy review day^^,here is Dark to give review on your nice-wonderful poem! I see the point here,quiet nice and beautiful.But just need to improve a bit grammar here; # ...
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Re: Life Lost
Hello Deanie,this is Dark to give review on your poem. I admire the way you deliver the message in the poem with a wonderful literary elements.Some lines may be improved ...
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Re: Lost in Darkness
Hi robertsoad,happy review day.Here is Dark to give review on your poem. # I'am a rover lost in darkness,-->I like when you use 'rover' to describe yourself as the one ...
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Re: Friends
Hi anshira,here is Dark to give review on your poem. This is one of my favorite poem in YWS!The theme is easy but you managed to modify it to be ...
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Re: Untitled Work 5
Hi arianaSarroyo,Dark here with a review on your poem! I love the poem that convey a message about the war. It should be a poem that educate and reap the ...
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Re: Me (for lack of a better title)
Hi ChangeTheWorld,have a good day.Here is Dark to give review on your poem! Naturally, a beautiful and meaningful poem here.Each stanzas has its own messages.Just let me review in each ...
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Re: Not Yet Solved
Hi WillowCutz,happy review day,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. I like the concept behind the poem of yours. Expression of feelings about something that has not ...
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