DreamWork

Hi JaynethJayla,DK here with review on your wonderful essay. I really like the quote you gave to define the existence of technology in modern man's life.Furthermore, you quote it from ...

hi babygiggles,dark here with review. First of all,I impressed with your own though here.Kinda depressed and 'sad' tone of voice.You mistype here; she feels deperessed*,So she wears a dress. A ...

Hi Jadefox,Dark with review here. I like this poem for gives impact on me.Making me wondering from the first part of your poem here. I rise before dawn, hide the ...

Hi DerickJerome,Dark here with review. I totally like the ideas and the title too.But a bit disappointed with the diction and rhythm. Only in fairy tales. Exist this so called ...

Hi EdrickeMalabanan, DK here with review on your wonderful essay. It's a pretty good start when you give a quote at the beginning of the essay.But I would strongly recommend ...

Hello glecile,DK here with review on your fantastic essay. Technology, Life and Humanity,-->the title of your essay give some idea of the main points that you will write in your ...

Hi Fizz,Dark with review here. Your story is unique with structured storyline. It is quiet suffocating me because you write each paragraph too lengthy without balancing the structures. However, the ...

Hi qt11596,Dark with review here! I like how the story going through.But I need to agree with the others that your story lack in makes the readers confuse and thus ...

Hi kobita,Dark here with review! OMG,the first time I saw your writing styles here,I was stuck and a little surprised.I mean this is rarely seen. You seem to be 'very ...

Hi babygiggles,Dark here with review. I totally like this story.Understandable and the plot flow smoothly even though there are problems on formatting and mistyping here c: I wonder why you ...

Hi SunsetSprite,Dark here with review! First of all,this fantasy story certainly have a good idea.It's about a special or mysterious piano that you have created at the beginning of the ...

Hi Hsarver!Dark here with review. Writing unique lyrics can be a challenge, and it's true that it's not easy. It's also true that it's not magic—it's a craft that you ...

Hello darkangel_05,Dark here with review on your song/lyric . Since I do not know how the rhythm of the music is, so I just comment on the lyrics c: This ...

Hi 221B,Dark here with review! First of all,don't messing up with the format here.I learn from people to keep it simple based on the type of poetry :) But never ...

Hi Liaya,Dark here with review! :) I like your poem that raises questions factly and answer all the questions anyway.The theme such as 'childish' but enthralling the readers. # I ...