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Re: Unbroken, Chapter Five, Part One
Favorite chapter so far! This adds a new layer to the story and to Sadie that I am eager to explore.
Jun 30, 2012 -
Re: Nate the Great.
Thanks that was what I was going for! :D
Feb 3, 2012 -
Re: Hook. Chapter 1.
Hey Lauren, thanks so much for the review. Now to answer your questions. 1. How is he shaving off boredom by tapping his foot and playing with his cuffs? Ares ...
Jan 31, 2012 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 5.
Thanks so much for the kudos revue! ;) I'm so happy you liked it. I think that you have a point about the descriptions. I definantly think that I need ...
Jan 30, 2012 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 5.
Hey Mjd, I'm glad you like the chapter even after jumping in right there in the middle. I think you are right about that paragraph though. That sentence does run ...
Jan 29, 2012 -
Re: The Four People Nina Helped (And the One She Couldn't)- P1
Wow, you did change this a lot and I have to say, you did good. I felt that you protrayed the characters even better this time. I liked the contrasted ...
Jan 21, 2012 -
Re: Hook. Chapter 3.
Thanks for the reviews guys! I'll try and get the next chapter done and posted soon. :)
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Family Matters. Chapter 1.
Dragonette, about Lilly being the wrong gender. Yes I knew that satyrs are technically only supposed to be male when I wrote Lilly, but I figured as a writer I'm ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Animal (Chapter 8)
Mike, you're killing me, man. All I can say is thank goodness you're not a slow poster. I'll be eagerly watching for the next chapter. :) ~DG
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Sin
Ok, you talked me into it. :) I'm going to put every two couplets together. The reason I didn't do this before was because I thought some of the lines ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: I'm Giving You Up.
Nice. An easy read and well written with a lot of feeling behind it. I don't have any complaints. :) Great job~ Dragongirl
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight
Thanks for the reviews.:) I went back and fixed some of the mess-ups. Some one wrote they thought it should be "Step" not "Stop softly in to the moonlight". That ...
Jun 2, 2011
