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Re: The Art of War
Your writing is awesome. I love the use of the English language in this piece. Your descriptions are words woven together to create a rare tapestry of a story I ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 8
Hey Dragongirl back for more! :) I keep reading these out of order but I am still enjoying them. The length of you chapters are good length and you have ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Angel Tears- Chapter 11
This is interesting, I have not read the previous chapters so I am not too invested in the characters of your story. That being said, I thought you did a ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: She wrapped time around her neck like a rope
Imagery is amazing, your punctuation is driving me bonkers! I love this poem. The pictures you weave from words are breathtaking. However, to enjoy this poem your reader has to ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Trials of a Master Thief: Chapter 2.5
Dragongirl ready to review the daylights out of this piece. Okay, maybe not the daylight out of it. True is there isn't much I would change about this piece. There ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 20
This is so good! I read one of your chapters a few days ago and reviewed. I thought that chapter was pretty good but I loved this chapter. Your characters ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Unrequited Lullaby: A Phantom of the Opera Fanfic (Chapter One)
I have never watched Phantom of the Opera, so I am probably am not the best person to give you a review. That being said, I did notice a few ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: Raya's Heritage Chapter Two
Redmoon, thanks for letting me know the next chapter was up! This chapter looks good. I know I was a little harsh in my review of chapter one but I ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: House Red - Chapter 1: Preparations
Hello, hello, hello! Dragongirl reporting for duty as requested! I have not read the prologue to this so if I make unnecessary comments or suggests I do apologize. Right off ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: The Real You
gauravkundu32 Dragongirl, here to review! I like the questions this poem presents. The content was tastefully done and your word choices were great. What I am going to focus on ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Raya's Heritage Chapter One
Redmoon, Dragongirl is in the house!!! I want to start off by saying your writing is clear and easy to read. I didn't notice and spelling or grammar mistakes so ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 31 Part 3
Well that was awkward. You know that feeling you get when you get caught in a room where the tension is so thick you can practically take a bite out ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 37 Part 2
Tricks and treachery! So I am coming into this late. I want to start off by stating that I have not read any of the 36 chapters leading up to ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 56
They don't put your name in green for nothing! Actually, I have no idea why they put your name in green, only that it is a sign of power in ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Cindercow
Hahahaha, This was so fun to read and I laughed my head off. I would totally love to see this as a illustrated children's book. The farmer made her live ...
Apr 18, 2015
