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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Art of War

    Your writing is awesome. I love the use of the English language in this piece. Your descriptions are words woven together to create a rare tapestry of a story I ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 8

    Hey Dragongirl back for more! :) I keep reading these out of order but I am still enjoying them. The length of you chapters are good length and you have ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Angel Tears- Chapter 11

    This is interesting, I have not read the previous chapters so I am not too invested in the characters of your story. That being said, I thought you did a ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: She wrapped time around her neck like a rope

    Imagery is amazing, your punctuation is driving me bonkers! I love this poem. The pictures you weave from words are breathtaking. However, to enjoy this poem your reader has to ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Trials of a Master Thief: Chapter 2.5

    Dragongirl ready to review the daylights out of this piece. Okay, maybe not the daylight out of it. True is there isn't much I would change about this piece. There ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 20

    This is so good! I read one of your chapters a few days ago and reviewed. I thought that chapter was pretty good but I loved this chapter. Your characters ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Unrequited Lullaby: A Phantom of the Opera Fanfic (Chapter One)

    I have never watched Phantom of the Opera, so I am probably am not the best person to give you a review. That being said, I did notice a few ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Raya's Heritage Chapter Two

    Redmoon, thanks for letting me know the next chapter was up! This chapter looks good. I know I was a little harsh in my review of chapter one but I ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: House Red - Chapter 1: Preparations

    Hello, hello, hello! Dragongirl reporting for duty as requested! I have not read the prologue to this so if I make unnecessary comments or suggests I do apologize. Right off ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: The Real You

    gauravkundu32 Dragongirl, here to review! I like the questions this poem presents. The content was tastefully done and your word choices were great. What I am going to focus on ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Raya's Heritage Chapter One

    Redmoon, Dragongirl is in the house!!! I want to start off by saying your writing is clear and easy to read. I didn't notice and spelling or grammar mistakes so ...

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 31 Part 3

    Well that was awkward. You know that feeling you get when you get caught in a room where the tension is so thick you can practically take a bite out ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 37 Part 2

    Tricks and treachery! So I am coming into this late. I want to start off by stating that I have not read any of the 36 chapters leading up to ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 56

    They don't put your name in green for nothing! Actually, I have no idea why they put your name in green, only that it is a sign of power in ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Cindercow

    Hahahaha, This was so fun to read and I laughed my head off. I would totally love to see this as a illustrated children's book. The farmer made her live ...

    Apr 18, 2015


Today I bent the truth to be kind, and I have no regret, for I am far surer of what is kind than I am of what is true.
— Robert Brault