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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the Doppler effect

    Confusing but beautiful. I really thought this was cool. The first reason being that you made a picture of the words. Amazing and hard to do. his bark; shrinking his ...

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i am made of clay

    Hey, First off thanks for sharing your work with the rest of us. I always feel like poetry is such a gift because so often it holds a personal piece ...

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: No Romance: Chapter 12

    So book characters coming alive, a book store that transports you. Interesting... I have not read your previous chapters but I must say this has potential. However because I have ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Narrative Re: An Orthodox life (Part 2)

    Okay, this is interesting. So I don't know where you are going with this. It's interesting for sure but I don't know anything about your characters. They are faceless, true ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Life Of Kronus, Part 3, Battle For Ivarstead

    Wow, this is a huge chunk of story to review, not only that but it spans a lot of time. So this starts out with some promising back story. Primal ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.03)

    Nice work. I am a fan of dragons in modern day settings so i find this story quite tantalizing. Not only that but some of your descriptions are absolutely lovely ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 12

    I am surprised this has no reviews. This is good, very good. I haven't read any of your previous chapters yet I was able to jump into this one without ...

    Oct 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Shadow Princess (Flashback 1: Strawberry Ice Cream)

    Hey Emma, hope you are having a great day! So you requested a review from me ages ago. Obviously, I am just now getting to it, My apologizes for the ...

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Culture Re: Irish Slave Trade (Chapter One - Book 2 maybe?)

    Silentbagpipe, My apologizes that I have taken so long to get to this. I won't bore you with my excuses though. Enough time has past already. Let's get to your ...

    Jul 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Royal Reborn: Prologue

    Hey Hey, It is Dragongirl here at last! So sorry for taking ages to get to this. So let's not waste anymore time. Diving in now! A Royal Reborn is ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Suhaag Raat

    Dragongirl here to review as requested! So the first thing I want to ask: was this story translated from a language other than English? It is just the way that ...

    Jun 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Inevitable Outcome Part 01: Flight (Edited)

    Roar!!! Dragongirl here to review, my apologies for taking so long to get to this. So I am not sure what kind of review you wanted. This is a pretty ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny : Chapter 2

    Hey, first off I want to apologize for taking so long to get to this. I have been super busy in the past month however I should have at least ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 1 (Revised)

    Vampires! Dragongirl here to review as requested. I enjoyed this chapter, I actually read it sometime ago but hadn't review it. *Feeling sheepish* Well the past is the past and ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Isolation Zone Chapter Two

    Kevin! It is I, Dragongirl here to review with style! I just finished reading the first chapter and figured I would review the second one because you don't have any ...

    Apr 29, 2015


If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.
— Emily Dickinson