Dragofriend1234

I want to start by saying that I'm so sorry you have to bear that pain. The only issue with this as a literary work is that you need capitalization ...

Wow. You are really good at telling stories. I like how you made the character without any major description. The girl could have been anyone, I like that anonymity. I ...

First of all, this is really powerful. You did a good job of capturing the pain and emotions behind the words. You just need to fix the small typos here ...

I enjoyed your poem very much. Thank you for writing it. I gather you are originally from Mexico and you miss your former home. The poem gives a feeling of ...

To start I would like to point out that you seem generally depressed. You may want to add some more clarification to your poem, as it left me rather confused. ...

Great job. Wonderful use of extensive vocabulary. I could really tell how sad the character was. You did a fantastic job of making it sound like a lament. I loved ...

This was so good I am going to call it supercalifragalisticexpeialadocious. I hardly ever use that in a review. The way in which you chose to describe your characters was ...

So funny. I think if you used any of these pickup lines on any girl she'd be gone like that. *snaps fingers.* I think you actually tried to think like ...

Love the poem. It holds a powerful message that is complicated in its simplicity. When you said "It burns through my soul with an everlasting light." I thought of a ...

Nice job to you. I loved the vocabulary you used. The tone of the poem seemed to be partially sad but more hopeful toward the end. I enjoyed how much ...

That poem was beautiful. You're pauses could use some work though. It was very sad. The character gave off the same impression as one trapped by their own feelings of ...