Dracula

Thanks, Rose! Great review. :)

Thank you! You've given me some awesome points to work on. The 'Clairvoy' thing is just a play on her name. Ethel links it with 'clairvoyance' and wonders if she ...

Thank you!! Your reviews are extremely helpful. :D

Thanks for the help! I'm definitely going to focus on making Eliza's feelings more prominent at the beginning when I get to editing. That's a great idea!

This isn't the end. A conclusion is yet to come. :)

Okay, so it /was/ a Frost Lark prison? And now I think that the end of the world the past criminals saw was actually a whole lot sooner than I ...

Oh my goodness my mind has been blown. You're absolutely right, I skipped over the date. Now I need to go back and reanalyse all of this.

Thanks! The 'crusades' at the end doesn't actually refer to the creatures being slaughtered, but the attempts of those trying to stop the slaughter. So that's why it may sound ...

Thank you! It would make a lot more sense if I put a note with what the poem is about, but I find myself not wanting to. XD

I did some spaces in between certain lines but that hasn't shown up, so just use your imagination.

Thanks!

You're very welcome. :D

I know you say the time after, but it still makes me stop and wonder. Haha okay. I think of wizards and warlocks as basically the same thing. But I ...

Ah, okay. Thanks for clearing that up!

Thanks for the detailed review! I look forward to going through it.