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Re: Taxidermist
This is absolutely fantastic! I love how you created the deer shape. The ear did make it a but difficult. Maybe you could have the poem running from left to ...
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Re: A Johnlock Poem
As soon as I saw the title I had to come read this! Now you've given me feels, so thankyou. It's a good thing that I have feels though, because ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: The Cap'n's Wife
Beautiful poem! I loved the part where he questions what she does at night. I was getting the impression that she was one of those stern sort of wives who ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: The Magic of Reading
Yup. I applaud you. You've put so many misunderstood adventurers' emotions into one poem. I really love this poem how it is. It comes across as not only a sort ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Rolled.
I agree with FiguringOutLife, this is clever and sweet. I'm not sure if it's meant to be or if it's just there for fun; that picture is a great part ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Color Poetry
Awesome! I loved that little haiku down the bottom, how you started on the subject and then went onto something completely different. This isn't really that big of a deal, ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: I hate you
This is a great poem, it really portrays the emotiosn quite well and flows brilliantly. I can't find any major things wrong with this. Just eight lines up from the ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Broomsticks: The Quidditch Tale
This is so good! It threw me back to the days of Harry Potter and thrust me into a Quidditch Pitch. The only thing I would change is the teriyaki ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Secret Garden
It's lovely! You describe emotions so beautifully and it really put me in the position of the character. Just two things to work on. Watch out for when you need ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: questions I ask myself everyday
This is actually quite fascinating. Before I first read it, I was wondering how this would work with just four lines, but it really works well. You made me think. ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Bits and Pieces from her Midnight Diary..
This is awesome! First I thought you were writing a story set in your own fantasy world away from reality, then your character got on YWS and it turned into ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Rebellion Of The Clueless
This is hilarious yet something that I think everyone can relate to in some way. I think it'd be perfect if you shortened the 'Doesn't mean I did...' line slightly. ...
May 11, 2014
