Dracula

Hey there, JustALittleBarry! I liked the overall tone of this poem, it flows well. It seems to me that you started a new line with each new 'subject' (the ring, ...

Hey there! My knowledge of America is lacking (to put it nicely) so I won't be able to help much in the facts department. I did have some thoughts come ...

I loooove the messages incorporated into the chapter. They're not just there as dialogue either, they play a part in telling me about the characters. Even by just looking at ...

Happy Review Day, Felistia! Overall, this was a good chapter. There's just one thing I noticed at the beginning which wasn't mentioned in the other reviews, so I'll go over ...

Council Meeting 2/19/17 Dracula's Notes I appreciate that you made the council members list. It was good to have a list of all the characters in Frost Lark's current council. ...

Hey, Biscuits! Hmm, right now, my preference is for the old title. I think it matched the sci-fi, out-of-this-world-weird style of the story a little more. Who knows, though, maybe ...

Here I am again! And here's some of my thoughts from this piece. I don’t believe in luck. When you include these stand-alone sentences, they really make me stop and ...

I loved reading this! It's very creative and magical. Your characters are great, especially that sassy lightning child. I did wonder why you chose lightning, but for starters, nothing has ...

Here I am! Thanks for letting me know about the new chapter. But Oran wasn’t finished. “And look at that one!” - pointing a finger coated in baby fat at ...

Here is another review that isn't really even a review. I discovered it was a fascinating place, full of diversity, rain, and good actors. I agree with the good actors ...

Here I am for a quick review! The inns’ rooms were just as impossibly nice as the rest of this village. The beds were soft, the walls were thick, and ...

Hey there, MeAndMyThoughts! I'm going to attempt to review this, though it's going to be very short. Okay, I love the message in this. You're technical, and say where the ...

Hey there, Morrigun! I don't usually review lyrics, but since you asked I'll give it a go. :) This might be short, though. There's a girl out in the graveyard ...

Alrighty, MeatBunCat, it appears I am still reviewing. :D Let's see how I go with this, knowing what happens later on. “What’s this?” I can’t help but mutter. A small ...

Hey there, BlackhawkUnder, and Happy Review Day! Or what's left of it, at least. First things first, this chapter is really long. That's not a bad thing, but on Yewis ...