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Re: swahili
Hello! The Mystery Machine has come to review. Well... Attempt to review. I don't know this language so I'm so sorry if I get the meaning wrong. What Google told ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Shakespearean Sonnet #2
Hello! I'm here for a super short review because... really... there's not anything wrong with this at all. The few things below are just little things that I personally picked ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Boy In The Shadows: Chapter 2
Hello! The Mystery Machine is here to review! Sit back and brace yourself! Just kidding. Relax. Are you ready? Good. First of all, I better tell you that I won't ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Strawberry Hearts -2-
Hello! The Mystery Machine is here to review this chapter for you! Are you enjoying review day? Are you comfortable? Are you ready for fuuuun? Yes? Good. Then sit back ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Miss Green's Home for special children
Hello! The Mystery Machine has come to review! First of all, when I read the title I think of Miss Peregrine's Home For Peculiar Children. Is this a fanfiction of ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Sipping Orange Juice
Hello! Team Aqua has come into the dark recesses of Poetry page 24, just to review this work! :P First of all, I really like it. I've no idea how ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Cat
Hello! Team Aqua has come again! So reviewing a haiku is so so so sooooo hard (you get the point)? :P So I like to describe what I imagine when ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Where I'm From: To Mom
Heya! I am from reading and listening to old records From the Beatles and Stephen King Nothing wrong here, just high fives for mentioning the Beatles. :D I am from ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Siege, Chapter six: The Slaughterer
Hello! So may main purpose here is to get your work out of the Green Room. Which I will do by getting in the spirit of Pokemon Day, but before ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 79 (Revised)
Hello! I haven't read your other chapters, so in this review I will mostly be editing and not picking on character development, etc. ...You've already edited this haven't you? I ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: You
I'll quickly get through the nitpicks... And never ever leaving behind I think it should say 'never leaving ME behind'. Gives a feeling grand I get what you're doing, but ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Kissing lesson with a sandwhich
Hey again! Goodness I laughed so hard at this short story! I've no idea where you got the idea to write this, and I'm not too sure that I do ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Do You Ever Dream?
*POKEMON THEME SONG STARTS* I wanna be the very best, Like no one ever was. To catch them all is my real test, To train them is my cause. I ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Story Or Summer (Ch. 5): Done
Hello! I'm here to give you a review. :D Okay, so first for the little typos... Sunshine, whatever you do he’s a completestranger. Your fingers typed too fast and you ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 8
Hello! Team Aqua here for a nice little review. There doesn't seem like much for me to say though, either you're an extremely talented writer or you've edited it yourself. ...
Jul 27, 2014
