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Re: The Hybrids (Chapter 11)(Chapter 10 *Revised)
Hello! I'm back on another one of your chapters. Again, I don't know the whole story so I'll just be looking for nitpicks in spelling, grammar, etc. I see Demitri ...
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Re: Forest Flounderer
Hello and Happy Review Day! Curse this forest. Curse it to the deities and curse it till the end of the world. Job wielded his ax like a weapon. With ...
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Re: with respect to distant stars
Hello and Happy Review Day! I was looking for poems in the Historical Fiction category, and this was the only one there! So I'm going to review it, even though ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Shade Users-Chapter 2 (2/2)
Hellow Shadowolf! That's a clever username, by the way, I like how you merged the two words. Anyway, I haven't read the previous chapter so I might be unsure on ...
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Re: Kingdom of Nine
Hello and Happy Review Day! I love reading legends about fantasy lands, they're always exciting and magical, which is what makes them so fantastic! Your poem did not disappoint one ...
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Re: The Evil Pimple
Hello and Happy Review Day! i'm just going to type this: ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! :) It's hilarious, probably because it's something that we can ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Phoenix Inferno 5pt2
Hello and Happy Review Day! I don't believe I've read any other parts of your story, so this review will just be about any nitpicks I find. Hopefully it will ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Candyland Chapter 3
Hello and Happy Review Day! Smaug is here to review. :) You've made a few typos in this; I think you thought faster than your fingers could type! But nevermind. ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Wish Life was a Book
Heya, Chrissy! Happy Review Day, fellow Smaugy! This is a poem I just wrote, it may be good, maybe not, but it is try to me. I found something wrong ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 10.3
Hey Deanie, Happy Review Day! It was a bit intimidating reviewing your work, just because it's a struggle to point out anythng wrong with it! But I tried to find ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: The Hybrids (Chapter 12)
Happy Review Day! While a servant is great, I don’t need one and if that’s all you’re going to be then you can go be someone else’s! This is just ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Fowl Meets Potter (Chapter 1)
Hello and Happy Review Day! I got just a little bit excited about this, it will be interesting to see how you have merged the two worlds. The Fowls were ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 25
Hello and Happy Review Day! I haven't read the other chapters so I'll just be looking for nitpicks. :) He was lucky he didn’t turn an ankle or miss a ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: .
Happy Review Day! I haven't read any previous parts, so this review will just be about nitpicks. Hopefully it will still be found helpful by you. :) I’d been in ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 2
Hello and Happy Review Day! I haven't read chapter one, so this review will mostly just be on any nitpicks I find. Hopefully this will be just as helpful as ...
Jan 25, 2015
