Dracula

This was pretty awesome! It was very creepy at times, but beautifully described and written. The only nitpick I have is this: The stench of rotting flesh (something across between ...

Heya! This is a very fast paced story, which does well seeing as it's in the action genre. Your characters were interesting and the story was pretty self explanatory, however ...

There is a place in the Chicken Capital of the World where the hooligans gather to feel at home. It is place where everyone is welcome, but only certain people ...

Hey, welcome to the Young Writers Society, Taniya! I hope you enjoy yourself here. :D We all are very active in social networking sites and we all have lots of ...

Hey, Noir! Welcome to the Young Writers Society. :D As a child, Clair Snow was lonely. She could see things, like strange spots or shadows,that others couldn't. I'm just going ...

I clicked on this piece because I was wondering why you were writing a letter to yourself. :P Now I can see that it's to your future self. This isn't ...

White mist parted around me. I was encased in a swirling, writhing cage of snakes of smoke. I couldn't see five inches in front of me, it was so thick, ...

Heya! Thank you so much for notifying me about the new chapter. Almost everyone who I ask doesn't and I end up missing out on some great stories. I'll get ...

Heya, I'm here to review. There's not much to correct here, so I'll get straight to it. She couldn’t see what the person looked like, other than that they weren’t ...

Hi! This will be a very quick review because I just want to help you on one thing: paragraphs. A new thought = a new line. If you need help ...

You are quickly becomming one of my favourite YWS authors. Everything is perfect; the imagery, wording, thoughts, everything! Shall I try and review this? I don't know how. Let's post ...

Hey, Falconer! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! If you need any help just ask. :) This short story is pretty cool, and I'm sure you know that. So I'm ...

Hello, Sunset101! I'm here to review your chapter. :) Sierra stared out through her rooms' window to seeing that everyone was getting ready for the day of the Picking, a ...

Hello! I'm going to break down the first stanza and tell you what I personally thought about it. :) I was sitting in town, feeding the birds. Nice first line. ...

Hello, yizhongt! Welcome to the Young Writers Society. :) Astrofleet Command has reassigned the Voyager from its initial mission of surveying gaseous anomalies and the gas giants in the Antues ...