Dracula

Hello, Cassaundrag1! Happy Easter. :) You're chapter is pretty great, I just found a few small editing mistakes which I've mentioned below. I'm moving to New York City after all ...

Heya, Reet3103! Happy Easter! Wow. Your writing is amazing. That first paragraph was delightful to read and no matter how hard I searched, I couldn't find anything that could be ...

Hello, EternalRain and Happy Easter! :) Overall, you've got a great chapter here. There's just a few typos which need to be corrected, which I'll list below. my face smushed ...

Heya, Captain! Happy Easter. :) We just got done with today's service, This sentence is very colloquial, which is fine considering that your charatacter is narrating. However, for a more ...

Hey! Your description made me eager to read this, so here I am. :) This would make a pretty nice picture book (not for children, though). The story in your ...

Hello, SuperJacobBice96! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you have fun. :D This was a really cute piece. I can definitely imagine little kids singing it to a ...

Heya! I'm here to review. It was sometime in June. My birthday, I think. They’d hate to hear that excuse, “I think”. We aren’t meant to think here. We are ...

Ohh a zombie story! I had a dream about a zombie apocalypse last night... it didn't exactly turn out well for me. I love the title! I love your prologue ...

Heya, Kanome. I'll have a go at reviewing for you. :D “What was that noise?” A man, probably in his teens, spoke quietly as he kept walking deep inside the ...

Dearest DragonLily, I am now challenging your draw your lovely, quite haunting, description of the beast named Anything. Lots of love, Dracula. Seriously though, you've got to have a go ...

I love the avatar. :) This is going to be a very, very short review. I really liked your sonnet! It was amazingly written and I only have one nitpick. ...

Hello, Your Majesty! This is a an extremely clever idea. The second half sounds perfect and I can understand exactly what message you're getting across. Your dreams let you do ...

Sometimes I wonder how people can live their lives, completely unaware that there are mythical creatures living among them. It’s really mind-blowing to me how oblivious people are to it. ...

Heya! You have a great storyline in this poem and it's coming along well. I found some errors which you might like to fix (however it's poetry, so you are ...

Hey! I'll try and find as many things as possible for you to improve, since that's the point of posting it. But from what I've read, it sounds pretty awesome! ...