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Re: The New Generation--Chapter 12: DOA Recording Studios
And here I am to finally get up to date on this! "Good question," Leia replied, looking out the window. "Let's find out!" She flung open the door and leaped ...
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Re: The New Generation--Chapter 11: The Gray Sisters
Aaaaand, it's me again, but you probably expected that. I'll do the same thing as the previous two reviews, pointing out things that could be improved. That don't feel discouraged! ...
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Re: The New Generation--Chapter 10: Help From a Wren
It's me again. :D Leia heard some cursing as a pop rang through the air, followed by a torpid splash. Mud rained down on her. Okay, first thing I suggest ...
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Re: The New Generation--Chapter 9: The First Monster
Dun dun dunnnnn, the first monster has arrived! I'm interested to see how they handle this. I could go on and on about cute this fanfiction this, how similar the ...
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Re: Dragon of the Forest (Working title)
Hello, I am here to review again on behalf of Team Monkey. Her long tail was curled elegantly around her talons as she gazed over the islands deep green forest ...
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Re: Writing ailments; their common symptoms, causes and general first aid.
Oh my goodness gracious me. Forget the writing, how did you achieve this kind of formatting masterpiece in YWS? My mind is blown and I haven't even started reading it ...
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Re: The Hunt: Chapter 3; Good Morning! You're going to die now.
Here I am for the final review, but feel free to let me know when the next chapters are uploaded! I opened my eyes to find myself in a white ...
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Re: The Hunt: Chapter 2; I become the master of the doggie paddle
Hey, it's me again. :) She raised her hand and a trident covered in barnacles materialized in her clenched fist. Woah. Woah. Woah. This whole scene is creepy. Brilliantly written, ...
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Re: The Hunt: Chapter 1; I get a psychopathic goldfish
Hello, Nymphealily! I intend to review the chapters in the Green Room, but I thought that it would be best to start at the beginning, so here I am! :D ...
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Re: witchcraft / casual practitioner
Well, I like the formatting very much! The ghost seems like a feisty character, the witch seems unwanted as if they can't get rid of her, and the girl seems ...
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Re: Another Night!
Hey, Bunny234! Dracula is here to review on behalf of Team Monkey! This poem is seems like lots of little poems jumbled together, and that's not a bad thing! I ...
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Re: Serpent of the Sands part 6
Here I am to review the final part, at least I think it might be the final part. ;) It's certainly much bigger than the others, so I'm excited to ...
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Re: It's Not The Same
This will be a short review, because there's not that much I can say! I have no nitpicks with it, as poetry can be written however you like. It all ...
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Re: The Beggar Boy
Greetings, InfiniteRectangles! I am here to review on behalf of Team Monkeys! This might as well have started with 'once upon a time' because it sounds just like a fairytale, ...
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Re: Serpent of the Sands part 5
It's me again. :) Red hot fires dot the earth’s bleak surface, And ash clouds sweep across the dark sky, In ruined rubble, the great north cities lie. Nice, so ...
Dec 30, 2015
