Dracula

Hey, Jessie! I like your use of present tense throughout the chapter. It made it really easy for me to imagine myself in the story and to become fully immersed ...

Hey there and Happy Review Day! :D The first nitpick I found was this: There were no windows or open doors on Nine Floor . You just need to swap ...

For some reason the mind is at its best when we should probably be sleeping. It's probably because we're so tired that our minds have started dreaming while we're still ...

Okay, I don't have much time so this won't be an ultra deep, right down to each letter type of review. I'll try to help you out though. :) Their ...

Greetings, Lady Artemis. ;) This was posted over ten days ago? I'm surprised there aren't any reviews yet. Well, here I am to finally give it one. And on Review ...

Hey, Ladybug! I don't have any suggestions plot-wise or character-wise, so I'm just going to get all nitpicky and maybe I can help a bit that way. :) But like ...

Hello, HolographicLadybug! This is going to be a short review, but hopefully it will be a helpful one too! :) “If you find any lead to where Link is, come ...

Hey, Ice! Happy Review Day. :) First of all, I'd like to give you a big thumbs up for the first snippet of your short story. In just one paragraph, ...

Hey there. This isn't really going to turn out like a review, but I'll give you my thoughts, just because you asked nicely. ;) When I read the first line, ...

Hey, Whatgoescomes! I'm here to review on behalf of Team Monkey! You've written s very emotional poem, and I'm sure that it will have a great effect on some readers. ...

Hey there, Chaser, I'm here to review on behalf of Team Monkey!! :D This chapter was enjoyable to read, you writing style is great and flows well throughout the whole ...

Hey! I thought I'd review this since it's still in the Green Room. They ran past an enormous golden dragon wrapped around a tree, into the forest. Some extra descriprion ...

Hey, SpencerReidIsMyLife! I'm here to review on behalf of Team Monkey. :) When the jet landed in Vegas, they all went to the local police department to set up and ...

It's me again, and I'm so happy you've included another picture! You do that in all your poems, right? It's awesome! The poem was full of... not 'action'... but thrilling ...

Woah. This was amazing, Meerkat! You are so talented! Monster don’t go away if you stop believing, I finally realize. Before I praise you anymore, I'll just mention this. I ...