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Re: Memory
Hey there, Gus. I have a dog called Gus! :P What I am writing about is very important, not only for me, but for science, and it is for the ...
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: The Kitten
Hey there, Scartuina! I'm here to tell you what I personally think this poem means. :) Okay, so... The red, cracked skin and writer's block means that the person is ...
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: Sick in the Brain
Hey there, Sofie! Let me first say that this is a great poem, simply because you wrote it. Poetry is an art form, just like painting or drawing, there are ...
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: a foreword
Prepare for a short review because there isn't much to say! This is a lovely little piece which would be a beautiful addition at the front of a novel, you ...
Aug 31, 2016 -
Re: The Pains and Pleasures of Memory
Ooh, a new member! Welcome to the society and thanks for following me! I loved this poem as soon as I read the first two lines. Often one’s heart is ...
Aug 2, 2016 -
Re: Blank Sheet
Hey there, NympheaLily! Happy Review Day! Since I haven't read this story from the start, I'm going to focus my review more on helping with editing rather than the plot, ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: The Golden Flame - Chapter 2: Mr.Nobody
Greetings from the Pokemon Universe! I am here to review. :D Evan glanced over Nathan who had said nothing during the entire trip, instead he had been staring into the ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: My One and Only
I have to admit that before reading this (and a few seconds after reading it) I had no idea what Elohim actually meant. Now, after googling, I am aware that ...
Jul 9, 2016 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 2.2
Thanks for letting me know about part two! Haha, I understand. I have some writing habits too that I just can't break, even though everyone tells me to. It's your ...
Jul 9, 2016 -
Re: United Worlds: Book One, The Beginning Of The End
Hey there, PoeticCowboy! This is a pretty short piece, you could probably just include it with chapter one if you wanted to, and label it 'prologue'. But either way, I ...
Jul 8, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 01
Hey there, NoirChocolat! Dracula is here to review. :) The piercing sound of the blade as it sliced its way towards him, still resounds in his mind until the last ...
Jul 8, 2016 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 2.1
Greetings, oh majestic monkey (aka BiscuitsBatchAvoy). :P I decided to review this only because the title sounds super interesting. Chip was not looking good, Margo reflected. He couldn’t be expecte
Jul 7, 2016 -
Re: Awake
Hey there and welcome to the Young Writers Society! :D The feverish temperature of the room made Sage sweat profusely as she stumbled and shoved her through the crowds of ...
Jul 1, 2016 -
Re: My World #1
Hey there, Asher123! You've got a pretty cool piece of work here. It reminds me of a diary (journal, if you prefer) entry; lots of emotions, feelings and random thoughts ...
Jul 1, 2016 -
Re: Chicago Chapter 13
Hey, Rascalover! I'm here to review your chapter. I'll focus mostly on editing things since I haven't read the other chapters, so can't really talk about the plot. The only ...
Jun 28, 2016
