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Awesome...very realistic too! I now understood chapter 9 -__-

Hehe i loved the turning point of this story! Can't wait to read the rest! :D

This was a good read. Loved it. It was sad too, in just a good way. But just a little bit cliche though. Keep it up! :)

Yep...I liked this poem...liked it alot ! I also liked the repetition at the beginning of each stanza. Keep it up, it was a lovely read. And yeah...i also feel ...

Yep. nice poem. So much like mee ! :o..;)

Haaaa omg that sounds soooo much like me ! O.o haha loved it ! :)

Wow. I liked this poem alot. It really showed the pain you felt. Sorry :/ Very nice. Keep it up ! :)

This was a nice poem. I think it would have been better with more emotions but i guess that's how you were feeling when you wrote this :/ Anyways i ...

Haha! This poem made me smile =) Love the way the quotes you used fitted together well. Nice keep it up :)

So i liked this piece. It is quite true...soo true actually. :)

Yeah i hae same question :P I was expecting some kind of drama from the parents? if not.....your story is just awesome..toooo incredible for words man !:D

Wow this really touched me. I really liked this poem. I like the way the realisation of the narrator is described at the end. Keep it up. :)

Hahaha =D I like that poem ! We humans are sooo predictable ! xD

eautiful ! I like the way you held my attention from the beginning ! An interesting reading it was :)

Hey ! I love the rhymes adn the poem too :) Good work.